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She Was As Mean As a Wild Dog

She was as mean as a wild dog She growled at him with her fierceness, but he kept trying, because he recognized sad when he saw it, sad masked as mean. She snarled at him, and snapped, and it kept him at bay for awhile, but he was not a give-up man. So he stayed, and tried hard. She let him almost touch her shoulder once, without flinching. But then she remembered how hurt she had been by another man, so she got angry, and she forgot herself, and she bit his hand, tearing the flesh with her jagged, sharp nasty teeth, smiling at his mournful howl, They danced this dance many times, before he finally left, giving up, feeling sad as he was the only one who knew how scared she was under her angry meanness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/4/2018 4:42:00 PM
What a fantastic write! One must give up eventually! To be loved is to be vulnerable!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/5/2018 12:14:00 AM
I see this in children who have been terribly sad, three-year-olds who come into PreK, snarling, already hopeless.
Date: 12/4/2018 3:55:00 PM
Very aptly described, and sad but true-to-life in the end... well written, my friend!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/5/2018 12:14:00 AM
So so true. And so sad.
Date: 12/4/2018 3:00:00 PM
Whew! That was rough.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/5/2018 12:15:00 AM
I do not always bite, but I am a biter when backed into a corner. Kidding? Not really...
Date: 12/4/2018 5:15:00 AM
so true...many reside a prisoner within themselves...a 'child' hiding behind a bully persona...fear protecting fear
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/4/2018 8:48:00 AM
I always take from personal experience, of course. GRRRRRR

Book: Shattered Sighs