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She Was a Star - I Was a Gazer

She was a star – I was a gazer Imagine my surprise when the stage door opened and in walked a goddess Dark hair, dark eyes, a bounce in her step, a leap in mine Fiddling with the curtain cord, I lost my balance and my heart in one fell swoop Spot lights focused, igniting the stars in my eyes which were still dim in her glow Dressing rooms offered champagne and cherries, but she looked at me Double checking the script, it wasn’t a love story - a poetic rewrite was in order I handed it to her when I finished, she tossed it aside and kissed me The curtain went up and the audience applauded, a standing ovation She was a star and I was a gazer - now we shine together

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Date: 1/20/2017 2:39:00 PM
That is so beautiful, and creative! A Fav!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thanks so very much Arthur.
Date: 1/20/2017 1:56:00 PM
Indeed some stars do shine brighter than others in our lives...And its nice when we gaze at them .They reflect sparkle in our eyes and glowlight in our hearts...Do not stop gazing Chris..You shine with or without a star through your words.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Charmaine, that is such a nice thing to say to me. I am really happy you liked this one.
Date: 1/20/2017 12:46:00 PM
A dreamer's wish come true...I do like that extra spring in your step one gets in love.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 12:58:00 PM
And I am a dreamer!!! :) Thanks so very much Tim.
Date: 1/20/2017 12:37:00 PM
Excellent Chris! Very well done :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thanks so very much Heidi.
Date: 1/20/2017 12:03:00 PM
I love that stargazer wordplay, that's wonderful! Champagne, cherries and script tossed aside. Lovely :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/20/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.

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