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She Walks With Me

She walks with me Out by the sea And I feel free Sharing my mind With me aligned One of a kind Disturbing not My silent thought She's my friend hot Gentle and soft A breath that wafts She soars aloft Her silken kiss That honeyed hiss Sweetest love bliss She and I dance A slow romance Left in a trance Round me, she twirls My hair, she curls Velvety swirls Seductive tease My senses please She's the sea breeze 24th February 2023

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Date: 2/28/2023 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. I am delighted to see it there. Thank you for sharing good metaphoric work. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2023 7:36:00 AM
Delightful as sea breeze. Much enjoyed the joyful voice, Jo.
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Date: 2/25/2023 5:38:00 AM
Just a sweet little three-lined rhyming poem full of emotion.
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Date: 2/25/2023 1:28:00 AM
What a cute poem, a rhymed three-liner and full of sentiments.
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Date: 2/24/2023 9:04:00 PM
Very lovely. I like those short lines
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:41:00 PM
so good to declare one's sentiments, very pleasant reading yann
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:30:00 PM
So sweet!
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:11:00 PM
I very enjoyable read, lovely poem!
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