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She the Ship

She, the ship sets sail across the sea. Topside the moon peeks through ports sides, Mice scurry across the floor lay below thrice. Soft wind blows the sail aloft, Nearby island views a joyful cry. Wrong or right a strong wind I long, Stone away my dreams unknown. Alone I lie open to the sea twice eyes shown, Blind to the ruby sky my mind finds Topside on the deck refined at eventide. 7/3/2020
Strand Completely New ( 5 ) Any Theme Any Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/6/2020 9:37:00 PM
Reflective delivery that truly fulfills the eyes, Eve, articulate expressions for a righteous acclamation, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/6/2020 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful metaphor,Eve. I love the way you wove all of the sailing terminology into this dreamy picture - "wrong or right a strong wind I long." Congratulations on your first place wind. Blessings.
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Date: 7/6/2020 12:10:00 PM
Nothing like being topside! Congrats on your winner in Brian's contest, Eve! :) gw
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Date: 7/6/2020 10:07:00 AM
Yes, the sea can do this! A lovely write Eve. Congratulations on your top win. :D
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Date: 7/6/2020 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your top well written inspirational winning poem. Reminds me of the joyful cry for a new birth sailing the unexpected and exciting winds of life
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Date: 7/6/2020 7:31:00 AM
Loved the happy voice sailing on joy--BIG congrats Eve on your TOP win.
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:54:00 AM
Lovely descriptive piece Eve! I enjoyed very much! Congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 7/4/2020 5:10:00 PM
As I look back, the greatest part of any journey was always the sailing to and from... Love this one!
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Date: 7/4/2020 4:18:00 PM
Keep on sailing my friend....
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Date: 7/4/2020 1:28:00 PM
This is a nice one Eve, lovely penning! Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 7/4/2020 5:43:00 AM
Love this and wish you many blessings!
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