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They all lined up for the start of the race. The men stayed close behind the leader's pace. Although Jane led every mile, all the men wore a big smile. Back of her shorts was peek-a-boo black lace. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ February 20, 2016 _ Limerick Contest by Jan

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Lu Loo

Date: 3/7/2016 8:30:00 AM

Lin, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

John Lawless

Date: 3/6/2016 9:08:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in the contest Lin...reads like the Pied Piper of Victoria Secret.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 2:59:00 AM

lol She didn't even have to play a tune. Thanks, John.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2016 8:08:00 PM

haha... nice write, Lin, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve

Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 2:57:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/6/2016 7:57:00 PM

Cute, well-written limerick! Congratulations on your win.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 2:57:00 AM

Thanks, Susan.

Sarita Milliner

Date: 3/6/2016 7:31:00 PM

No wonder she won!!! Congratulations Lin!!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 2:56:00 AM

Thanks, Sarita.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2016 7:21:00 PM

Cute one. Congrats on the win.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/7/2016 2:56:00 AM

Thank you.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/6/2016 6:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Peaches. I liked it the first time I read it and it was just as funny the second go around. Peace my friend:)

Lin Lane
Date: 3/6/2016 6:48:00 PM

Thank you, Danny.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2016 6:00:00 PM

Very amusing Lin congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 3/6/2016 6:48:00 PM

Thank you, Jan.

White Sage

Date: 2/26/2016 9:29:00 AM

amusing, been wondering if the men are hole-headed, but the ending really showed the reason, i'll call that a dressing-room fault LOL...can't wait to see the expression on her face when the race ends...this is one well penned limerick Lin, best of luck in the contest

Lin Lane
Date: 2/26/2016 9:38:00 AM

The expression on her face was one of victory. She was well aware of her 'bare,' strategy. Thanks, Sage.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/20/2016 7:53:00 PM

So cute ....Femme fatale for sure. Tee hee

Lin Lane
Date: 2/21/2016 7:46:00 AM

lol Suz.. Yes, she is. Thanks!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 2/20/2016 1:39:00 PM

Lol, Lin :)..tastefully charming...peace, jill

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2016 3:10:00 PM

Thank you, Jill.

Constance La France

Date: 2/20/2016 1:21:00 PM

Lin, this is a good one for the contest, so funny, a winner for sure, not sure if you read mine yet ~

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2016 3:10:00 PM

Thanks, BW.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/20/2016 12:55:00 PM

I don't blame them. Very funny Lin. Good luck Peace:)

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2016 3:10:00 PM

Thank you.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/20/2016 10:48:00 AM

Very clever and good ... CayCay

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2016 3:09:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2016 10:26:00 AM

very cute ending to yours, Lin!! By the way, thanks so much for my placement. I was shocked to see the contest shot up to 34 entries when it was below 30 when I left for work in the morning!!

Lin Lane
Date: 2/20/2016 10:29:00 AM

Thanks for liking this silly limerick, Andrea. I'm glad your entry made it in time...especially since I think it'll be the last one I host.