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She Says

. She says "bright colors" I agree She says "strong arms" I believe She says "I love you" my heart profusely bleeds

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2010 6:53:00 PM

I hope it is bleeding from joy?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/1/2009 2:56:00 PM

James, I can see what you mean about being a man of few words. However, in just a short space you successfully convey a powerful feeling. You must love her dearly. Hope you've shown this beautiful poem to her! Love, carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/1/2009 10:32:00 AM

brightly coloured,strongly penned,and filled with love-bravo talented friend----much said in few words---charma

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/1/2009 8:31:00 AM

A+ poem.

Emily Kroeger

Date: 5/1/2009 7:51:00 AM

Wow! this is beautiful.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/1/2009 7:45:00 AM

A very profound cup of emotion served in the beautiful hands of poetry ... love and power.