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She said, 'Oh, that just can't be'

She said, "Oh, that just can't be! Your poems have no semblance to reality!" I said, "How can you say that, when it's painfully clear that it's the reality of me!”

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Date: 3/16/2025 11:25:00 AM
you nailed it.... : ) ......len
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Marinus Jansen
Date: 3/16/2025 6:53:00 PM
Wow. Thanks, len. :-)
Date: 3/16/2025 11:24:00 AM
Hello Marinus Jansen, You told her very well. how you felt of what shew said to you./Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 3/16/2025 6:56:00 AM
Your poem made me smile - we are allowed to be dreamers in our poetry - so many of my writes are totally fictional. write on! hugs jan xx
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