She Never Believed

In this magical forest, in every enchanted tree,
There lived odd creatures that are so rare to see,
White unicorns and tiny fairies with glowing wings,
Huge, green dragons and a mermaid who sings,
So many stories this curious, little girl had heard,
Though, she did not believe in a single word.

She moved the long grass and peered through,
To find a babbling brook with waters of blue,
Her eyes grew wide and she could not speak,
When she saw what was floating along the creek,
A tiny, glowing fairy was sitting upon a daisy,
Who was gazing at the sky and feeling quite lazy.

The sprite was frightened by this sweet, little girl,
Who was curiously twisting a little, blonde curl,
The fairy jumped up from the daisy and into flight,
The innocent, little girl had meant her no fright,
She watched with wonder as she flew away,
And wanted to catch her and ask her to stay.

All of a sudden this girl began to slowly shrink,
In her little mind she had no idea what to think,
When a giant butterfly had just landed at her side,
She quickly grabbed onto it's wings to go for a ride,
She could tell this sprite stories she had never heard,
And wondered if she would believe in a single word.





Roger Horsch's contest - "The Magical Forest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nehls Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 3:34 AM
Hi Kelly. There are some that will read your words and see the magical forest for the first time and others that live there also and will give an understanding nod. Either way you have given us all a gift that can lead us a little farther into the world of imagination. Or is it real. Nicely done, my friend.... Robert.
Deschler Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Hi Robert, your kind comments are very much appreciated.. I am so glad that you enjoyed this poem, my friend... It makes me smile whenever I can inspire someone's imagination to write or just to help them forget about their troubles, even for a little while :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 7:36 PM
I see you have another win with this beauty! Congratulations Kelly.
Deschler Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Thanks so much for the kind congrats, Rick!
George   Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Wow! What a ride that would be, on the wings of a butterfly. Beautiful story, Kelly. Thank you for sharing. Elaine c. George
Deschler Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:54 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Elaine. I'm happy that you enjoyed my story! It was a lot of fun to write :)
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Kelly, I just stopped by to say congrats on your win:-)Alexis
Deschler Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 12:02 AM
Thank you for stopping by my poem, Alexis. I appreciate it :)
A   Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 2:07 AM
KELLY Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~
A  Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Kelly,, Congratulations on your awesome story win. Love SKAT
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 2:10 PM
a wonderful story Kelly many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Your kind comments are always appreciated, Jan. Thank you :)
Lindley Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 11:42 PM
A very fine story told and children know such places exist. It is we adults that lose sight of it all. However you recaptured and resented in magnificent form that greatness of fairy tales and children's dreams. BBBravoo!!!!!!!!!
Deschler Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 1:50 AM
Thank you for these wonderful comments, my friend! I am still very much a kid at heart, and I will never grow out of fantasy or imagination! This poem was pure joy for me to write, and I'm happy that you enjoyed it, too!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Hi Kelly, I enjoyed this fascinating well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
Deschler Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Hi Pandita, thank you very much for the great comments and the kind congrats. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Onclaud Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 1:58 PM
such a winsome fairy tale for all time, kelly.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Nette! I appreciate it very much. Hugs :)
Davis Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Kelly What a charming and imaginative tale you have created. A different and unique story for the reader Thank you for the great comment on my One chance poem
Deschler Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Robin. I always appreciate your kindness! :)
Merrill Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 3:02 AM
Hi Kelly. Quite a following you have here; may I have some of it? lol You hardly need my comment, but since I'm here...I luv it! This and all of your writes. They are a pleasure to read. Drop by anytime--and bring your rock-star following; I've got the room :) Love and hugs, Mel :)
Deschler Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Hi Mel, thank you for your kind words. I am just glad that people do enjoy my poetry and take the time to comment on it. You will get more notice if you enter and place in the contests. I know how you feel, Mel. When I first joined Poetry Soup, I had a difficult time getting people to read my work. But, eventually they started to notice me. Hugs to you :)
Perera Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 11:54 PM
I see all the scenes play right in front of my eyes when I read it.... It's lovely... Congrats!!!
Deschler Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Thank you so much! I am very happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 5:01 PM
I can see why this was a winner, I just love it! Congratulations!
Deschler Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Thank you very much, Richard. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Hamilton Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 5:19 PM
as usual outstanding poem Kelly congrats on win
Deschler Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 2:58 PM
Thank you, Shadow. That really meant so much to me!
Dunn Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Great work on this write beautiful poem love it's images and visual wording. cheri
Deschler Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 12:57 AM
Thank you very much, Cheri. I always appreciate your kind visits, my friend! :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 3:55 PM
wow!!!! i love the images i can picture within the lines.. :D i love cartoons and one of my favorite is tinkerbell.. i imagine her here.. :D
Deschler Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 12:35 AM
Thank you so much, Olive! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem! I love cartoons, too, and I think Tinkerbell would love living in this magical forest setting! You might also enjoy reading my poem titled, "A Fairy's Fantasy".
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 4:02 PM
much congratulations to you win.. ===olive_eloi :)
A   Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Hi Kelly, I was waiting eagerly for Roger to finalize his contest.... hehehe.. I love Roger's, super winning list.... Congratulations, on your win. I like The Magical Forest theme.... xox ~LINDA
Deschler Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Hi Linda, I was looking forward to seeing the winner's list of Roger's contest, too. I was surprised to see my name near the top! Thank you so much for stopping by, PD. :)
Mehta Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Enjoyable and creative write, congrats on the fine win, kelly
Deschler Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 12:39 AM
Thank you once again, Dr. Ram. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Horsch Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 10:06 PM
Hello Kelly, Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your win.......Hugs......Roger
Deschler Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Hello Roger, You are very welcome. I really did enjoy writing for your contest. I'm so happy that you liked my poem! Thank you so much for my placement! Hugs :)
Walker  Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 9:55 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena
Deschler Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 10:32 PM
Thank you very much, Verlena! I do appreciate you stopping by. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Hey, I'm seeing you won. WAY to GO, kelly. Good seeing you made the list.
Deschler Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Thank you for being so kind, Andrea! I really enjoyed writing for this contest. I'm glad this poem made the list!
Duggan Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 11:41 PM
That is beautiful Kelly good luck in the contest............V era......................
Deschler Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, Vera! I do appreciate the good luck wishes. :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Enjoyed your make-believe world where Fairies reign..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Deschler Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much, Sara! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 8:52 PM
this is very creative writing for the magical forest contest. Good luck. I am sure it will rate high!
Deschler Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate your kind comments. :)
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