Get Your Premium Membership

She Never Believed

In this magical forest, in every enchanted tree, There lived odd creatures that are so rare to see, White unicorns and tiny fairies with glowing wings, Huge, green dragons and a mermaid who sings, So many stories this curious, little girl had heard, Though, she did not believe in a single word. She moved the long grass and peered through, To find a babbling brook with waters of blue, Her eyes grew wide and she could not speak, When she saw what was floating along the creek, A tiny, glowing fairy was sitting upon a daisy, Who was gazing at the sky and feeling quite lazy. The sprite was frightened by this sweet, little girl, Who was curiously twisting a little, blonde curl, The fairy jumped up from the daisy and into flight, The innocent, little girl had meant her no fright, She watched with wonder as she flew away, And wanted to catch her and ask her to stay. All of a sudden this girl began to slowly shrink, In her little mind she had no idea what to think, When a giant butterfly had just landed at her side, She quickly grabbed onto it's wings to go for a ride, She could tell this sprite stories she had never heard, And wondered if she would believe in a single word. Roger Horsch's contest - "The Magical Forest"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 10/1/2017 3:34:00 AM
Hi Kelly. There are some that will read your words and see the magical forest for the first time and others that live there also and will give an understanding nod. Either way you have given us all a gift that can lead us a little farther into the world of imagination. Or is it real. Nicely done, my friend.... Robert.
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2017 10:39:00 PM
Hi Robert, your kind comments are very much appreciated.. I am so glad that you enjoyed this poem, my friend... It makes me smile whenever I can inspire someone's imagination to write or just to help them forget about their troubles, even for a little while :)
Date: 7/16/2015 7:36:00 PM
I see you have another win with this beauty! Congratulations Kelly.
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/23/2015 10:11:00 PM
Thanks so much for the kind congrats, Rick!
Date: 7/16/2015 12:30:00 PM
Wow! What a ride that would be, on the wings of a butterfly. Beautiful story, Kelly. Thank you for sharing. Elaine c. George
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/23/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Elaine. I'm happy that you enjoyed my story! It was a lot of fun to write :)
Date: 7/15/2015 2:37:00 AM
Kelly, I just stopped by to say congrats on your win:-)Alexis
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/21/2015 12:02:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by my poem, Alexis. I appreciate it :)
Date: 7/14/2015 2:07:00 AM
KELLY Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~
Login to Reply
Date: 7/14/2015 12:22:00 AM
Kelly,, Congratulations on your awesome story win. Love SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2015 2:10:00 PM
a wonderful story Kelly many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/17/2015 10:08:00 PM
Your kind comments are always appreciated, Jan. Thank you :)
Date: 7/22/2014 11:42:00 PM
A very fine story told and children know such places exist. It is we adults that lose sight of it all. However you recaptured and resented in magnificent form that greatness of fairy tales and children's dreams. BBBravoo!!!!!!!!!
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/26/2014 1:50:00 AM
Thank you for these wonderful comments, my friend! I am still very much a kid at heart, and I will never grow out of fantasy or imagination! This poem was pure joy for me to write, and I'm happy that you enjoyed it, too!
Date: 6/25/2014 4:28:00 PM
Hi Kelly, I enjoyed this fascinating well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/27/2014 12:56:00 PM
Hi Pandita, thank you very much for the great comments and the kind congrats. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 6/25/2014 1:58:00 PM
such a winsome fairy tale for all time, kelly.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/27/2014 12:43:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Nette! I appreciate it very much. Hugs :)
Date: 4/21/2014 4:44:00 PM
Kelly What a charming and imaginative tale you have created. A different and unique story for the reader Thank you for the great comment on my One chance poem
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/22/2014 1:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, Robin. I always appreciate your kindness! :)
Date: 4/16/2014 3:02:00 AM
Hi Kelly. Quite a following you have here; may I have some of it? lol You hardly need my comment, but since I'm here...I luv it! This and all of your writes. They are a pleasure to read. Drop by anytime--and bring your rock-star following; I've got the room :) Love and hugs, Mel :)
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2014 8:49:00 PM
Hi Mel, thank you for your kind words. I am just glad that people do enjoy my poetry and take the time to comment on it. You will get more notice if you enter and place in the contests. I know how you feel, Mel. When I first joined Poetry Soup, I had a difficult time getting people to read my work. But, eventually they started to notice me. Hugs to you :)
Date: 4/6/2014 11:54:00 PM
I see all the scenes play right in front of my eyes when I read it.... It's lovely... Congrats!!!
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/10/2014 1:16:00 PM
Thank you so much! I am very happy that you enjoyed my poem! :)
Date: 4/2/2014 5:01:00 PM
I can see why this was a winner, I just love it! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/3/2014 4:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, Richard. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 4/1/2014 5:19:00 PM
as usual outstanding poem Kelly congrats on win
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/2/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow. That really meant so much to me!
Date: 3/29/2014 5:58:00 PM
Great work on this write beautiful poem love it's images and visual wording. cheri
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/31/2014 12:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Cheri. I always appreciate your kind visits, my friend! :)
Date: 3/29/2014 3:55:00 PM
wow!!!! i love the images i can picture within the lines.. :D i love cartoons and one of my favorite is tinkerbell.. i imagine her here.. :D
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/31/2014 12:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Olive! I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem! I love cartoons, too, and I think Tinkerbell would love living in this magical forest setting! You might also enjoy reading my poem titled, "A Fairy's Fantasy".
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/29/2014 4:02:00 PM
much congratulations to you win.. ===olive_eloi :)
Date: 3/29/2014 1:12:00 PM
Hi Kelly, I was waiting eagerly for Roger to finalize his contest.... hehehe.. I love Roger's, super winning list.... Congratulations, on your win. I like The Magical Forest theme.... xox ~LINDA
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/30/2014 1:33:00 PM
Hi Linda, I was looking forward to seeing the winner's list of Roger's contest, too. I was surprised to see my name near the top! Thank you so much for stopping by, PD. :)
Date: 3/29/2014 5:50:00 AM
Enjoyable and creative write, congrats on the fine win, kelly
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/30/2014 12:39:00 AM
Thank you once again, Dr. Ram. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 3/28/2014 10:06:00 PM
Hello Kelly, Thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your win.......Hugs......Roger
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/29/2014 10:31:00 PM
Hello Roger, You are very welcome. I really did enjoy writing for your contest. I'm so happy that you liked my poem! Thank you so much for my placement! Hugs :)
Date: 3/28/2014 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/29/2014 10:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Verlena! I do appreciate you stopping by. :)
Date: 3/28/2014 9:50:00 PM
Hey, I'm seeing you won. WAY to GO, kelly. Good seeing you made the list.
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/29/2014 10:25:00 PM
Thank you for being so kind, Andrea! I really enjoyed writing for this contest. I'm glad this poem made the list!
Date: 3/21/2014 11:41:00 PM
That is beautiful Kelly good luck in the contest............V era......................
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/24/2014 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Vera! I do appreciate the good luck wishes. :)
Date: 3/21/2014 6:23:00 AM
Enjoyed your make-believe world where Fairies reign..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/22/2014 4:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem. :)
Date: 3/20/2014 8:52:00 PM
this is very creative writing for the magical forest contest. Good luck. I am sure it will rate high!
Login to Reply
Deschler Avatar
Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/21/2014 5:29:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I appreciate your kind comments. :)
12

Book: Shattered Sighs