Nate Baumgartner Poet Rhyme

She Left Me

I see her walking away from me,

Please.. Stop... Could this really be?

Now I'm standing all alone,

and get this chill all the way to the bone.

I lay in bed alone at night,

I start to think, it's just not right.

I loved her so much, I told her everyday,

and I tried to show her in every way.

I feel so cold, like im covered in frost,

without her, I'm completely lost.

I feel myself start to fall asleep,

but before I do I begin to weep.

I want to forget what happened today,

but my brain is jammed; it's stuck on replay.

How can I live without her in my life,

now i seem to have quite a strife.

I will move on, i'll try really hard,

and never again will i be caught off guard.

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Beata Agustin August 29, 2026 at 5:15 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 26, 2016 at 12:52 AM Nate nice to read this one again. LINDA

Skat A August 8, 2015 at 12:58 AM nate, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2011 at 10:28 PM impressed and sad... hope the feelings are better now... sure enjoyed have a nice one,..Linda

Michael J. Falotico February 6, 2011 at 11:38 AM Very heartfelt write my friend, been there before

Robert Pettit February 6, 2011 at 11:16 AM Good simple wording and rhyming make this presentation easy to read and understand. In the third line from the bottom, you have a typographical error: "srtife" should be "strife". Everything else looks fine.