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She Left Me

I see her walking away from me, Please.. Stop... Could this really be? Now I'm standing all alone, and get this chill all the way to the bone. I lay in bed alone at night, I start to think, it's just not right. I loved her so much, I told her everyday, and I tried to show her in every way. I feel so cold, like im covered in frost, without her, I'm completely lost. I feel myself start to fall asleep, but before I do I begin to weep. I want to forget what happened today, but my brain is jammed; it's stuck on replay. How can I live without her in my life, now i seem to have quite a strife. I will move on, i'll try really hard, and never again will i be caught off guard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/26/2016 12:52:00 AM
Nate nice to read this one again. LINDA
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Date: 8/8/2015 12:58:00 AM
nate, Enjoyed reading your poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2011 10:28:00 PM
impressed and sad... hope the feelings are better now... sure enjoyed have a nice one,..Linda
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Date: 2/6/2011 11:38:00 AM
Very heartfelt write my friend, been there before
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Date: 2/6/2011 11:16:00 AM
Good simple wording and rhyming make this presentation easy to read and understand. In the third line from the bottom, you have a typographical error: "srtife" should be "strife". Everything else looks fine.
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