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She Is Like-

She is like a black rose Standing amongst other inferior ones Blushing to and fro with gushes On an exquisite morning… She is like a blooming moon Cynosure of every one's eye Shedding its milky ness on the forehead of sky Shining on a dingy dark night… She is like a curling stream To which every one rushes Flowing with esteem and passion Alone in the green vale… She is like blood in vein Which keeps the life running In the body of an individual Giving warmth to body… She is like a cool breeze Blowing on a white day Irrespective of the object 'n' individual Charming with its fragrance…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/14/2008 11:31:00 AM
What a lovely written romantic poem. Oh my it's irresistable! Well deserved to be featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/13/2008 10:23:00 AM
Love, love, love this poem! So romantic and loving! Whatever woman is in your life she can be truly blessed with these words! Awesome!
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Date: 12/9/2008 5:48:00 PM
Congrats on your featured write! Happy holidays! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/8/2008 8:00:00 PM
Congrats Saif on "She Is Like..." being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 12/8/2008 1:12:00 PM
She is beautiful! You have painted her in all her glory with your beautiful words, dear Saif. lainie
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Date: 12/7/2008 4:58:00 PM
Saif - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:55:00 PM
Saif, I really appreciate the intensity you have injected into this poem for your readers to grasp. Congratulations for being featured... MPK
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:15:00 PM
Great descriptions in this poem! Congratulations on this being featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/7/2008 2:33:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery. Much for the reader to ponder. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/30/2008 1:58:00 AM
'She is like a blooming moon', what a lovely and novel idea....
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Date: 8/28/2008 9:32:00 PM
This is an excellent write. I like the descriptiveness of the piece. Great job and welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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