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'she Has Charisma'

she captures you with her smile as she welcomes you into her warm embrace don't let the smile fool you she has some devastating power not everybody can withstand her magnetism I, for one get drawn to her instantly I love the joy she brings when families gather around and all you hear are laughter children playing - spreading her arms wide welcoming a new day ©011220111355

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Date: 3/9/2012 8:32:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Wilma. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:12:00 AM
Happy writes are all write.." pleased at the read of this Wilma...!
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Date: 12/11/2011 10:00:00 AM
A very uplifting write here Wilma, thank you always for your great comments..)
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Date: 12/6/2011 5:03:00 PM
Yep you have it girl and what a turner onner you are
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:16:00 PM
A charismatic person with devastating power can have a tremendous influence. Hitler is one example, but I think you are writing about sunrise...am I off track? I love the image of a joyful family with laughter and children playing. Beautiful and intriguing poem, Wilma!
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:37:00 AM
Sounds like a poem about ex girlfriends of mine. But the images of the Sun and not letting go is mesmerizing. Missed my sweet poet friend. Hugs all day for you. Love Michael
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:40:00 PM
Wilma, this one could describe my sister Melanie. She is a very BIG woman but her smile and her love are bigger than the ocean and everyone adores her! Great poem
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Date: 12/1/2011 4:27:00 PM
Enjoyed readng your great work..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2011 10:56:00 AM
oh darn!!! and I thought you were talking about me here?! What a letdown to read your comment below, missy :(... super kidding ^_~-- I honestly thought this was about your mom...:D -- mwahugs :) thanks again for your words...
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 12/1/2011 10:56:00 AM
I forgot to say-- I really loved this one, and how you describe the sun here, so so true ;D
Date: 12/1/2011 5:43:00 AM
I assume that you wrote this about yourself Wilma?
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Wilma Neels
Date: 12/1/2011 5:46:00 AM
huh uh, Tony :) I was actually referring to the sun and her magnetism..

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