SHE HAD A FIVER IN HER POCKET

she had a fiver in her pocket
but couldn’t flip it, like in days of old
then
without those satin liners
a hole seized what little she had
and
she leaned over to find a useless penny
engraved with Abe Lincoln’s head
cut off
from making anything at all
happen in this tough life
still
she read of someone who had
spun straw into gold
must
she give up her firstborn
to a chump like Rumplestiltskin
will
money make her a monster
is that what she’s really after
then
she slips on a banana peel
no it was her crisp fiver
which
she slips into a poor man’s hand
he accepts without regrets
and
takes her hand in marriage
he turned out to be rich after all
where
would she be, if she had
listened to the beast

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Date: 4/28/2024 10:21:00 AM
Nice! You are a true poet and I feel humbled next to your brilliant poetry! I'm super impressed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 2:19:00 PM
I appreciate your encouragement, sweet poet! <3
Date: 4/7/2024 3:02:00 AM
I have found that sometimes those with very little(according to our skewed measure) will give the most. Material gifts being a very small expression of that. Your poem makes its point excellently
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 2:20:00 PM
Material or otherwise…a kindness is a kindness.
Date: 4/7/2024 1:54:00 AM
Loved the ending on this poem, Aysha
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2024 2:21:00 PM
Thank you, Aysha!
Date: 4/6/2024 5:17:00 AM
This is great Kim. I enjoyed this :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2024 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 4/5/2024 2:33:00 AM
Loved the happy ending, Kim. Always look at the good and bright side of life. Hugs. xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thank you,Victor!
Date: 4/4/2024 6:06:00 PM
Very creative way to make a great point, Kim. Life is what it is, don't let the negative and evil affect how you live it. Focus on the positive and Godly and it will be what it is meant to be for you. I like the positive ending. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/6/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Bill! Blessings!
Date: 4/4/2024 12:44:00 PM
Love the title dear Kim and the clever, entertaining poem. It’s great fun and well written. Such a lovely, happy ending with her good deed being returned to her magnificently! Really enjoyed it. Hugs and blessings xx :):)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2024 4:22:00 PM
Want life to be like this…perhaps it is if we look on the bright side!
Date: 4/4/2024 12:26:00 AM
Everyone loves a happy ending Kim, there's enough gloom in the world right now. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2024 4:21:00 PM
You are so right! Thank you!
Date: 4/3/2024 3:14:00 PM
Hello Kim, Oh love the4 ending. My fav.Hugs /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/5/2024 11:28:00 AM
Hello Kim, You are welcome. hugs. /Darlene/
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2024 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene! So happy you faved.
Date: 4/3/2024 10:57:00 AM
So, thinking that Fiver brought her luck! What a fun read Kim!! Happy Wednesday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2024 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Mike! Happy Wednesday! :)
Date: 4/3/2024 9:06:00 AM
sometimes Happy Ending to exist, like this one Kim, wish it happened more often, have a great day, keep writing, and smilin' too xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2024 10:46:00 AM
True! May you find happy every day :)
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