SHE HAD A FIVER IN HER POCKET

she had a fiver in her pocket
but couldn’t flip it, like in days of old
then
without those satin liners
a hole seized what little she had
and
she leaned over to find a useless penny
engraved with Abe Lincoln’s head
cut off
from making anything at all
happen in this tough life
still
she read of someone who had
spun straw into gold
must
she give up her firstborn
to a chump like Rumplestiltskin
will
money make her a monster
is that what she’s really after
then
she slips on a banana peel
no it was her crisp fiver
which
she slips into a poor man’s hand
he accepts without regrets
and
takes her hand in marriage
he turned out to be rich after all
where
would she be, if she had
listened to the beast
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Woods Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Nice! You are a true poet and I feel humbled next to your brilliant poetry! I'm super impressed!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:19 PM
I appreciate your encouragement, sweet poet! <3
Mo Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:02 AM
I have found that sometimes those with very little(according to our skewed measure) will give the most. Material gifts being a very small expression of that. Your poem makes its point excellently
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:20 PM
Material or otherwise…a kindness is a kindness.
Nuwas Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 1:54 AM
Loved the ending on this poem, Aysha
Rodrigues Avatar
April 28, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Thank you, Aysha!
Sands Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 5:17 AM
This is great Kim. I enjoyed this :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 2:33 AM
Loved the happy ending, Kim. Always look at the good and bright side of life. Hugs. xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Thank you,Victor!
Baker Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 6:06 PM
Very creative way to make a great point, Kim. Life is what it is, don't let the negative and evil affect how you live it. Focus on the positive and Godly and it will be what it is meant to be for you. I like the positive ending. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Thank you, Bill! Blessings!
Bowring Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Love the title dear Kim and the clever, entertaining poem. It’s great fun and well written. Such a lovely, happy ending with her good deed being returned to her magnificently! Really enjoyed it. Hugs and blessings xx :):)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Want life to be like this…perhaps it is if we look on the bright side!
Cunningham Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 12:26 AM
Everyone loves a happy ending Kim, there's enough gloom in the world right now. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 4:21 PM
You are so right! Thank you!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Hello Kim, Oh love the4 ending. My fav.Hugs /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Hello Kim, You are welcome. hugs. /Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Thank you, Darlene! So happy you faved.
Gentile Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 10:57 AM
So, thinking that Fiver brought her luck! What a fun read Kim!! Happy Wednesday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Thank you, Mike! Happy Wednesday! :)
Rose  Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 9:06 AM
sometimes Happy Ending to exist, like this one Kim, wish it happened more often, have a great day, keep writing, and smilin' too xo
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 10:46 AM
True! May you find happy every day :)
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