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She Did It Again

It was dead on arrival, no chance of survival, the tiny brown mouse. She did it again, my cat gifting friend, at least it's not loose in the house.. Be it mouse or shrew, would make a potent rodent stew, but not so appealing to me. Stir it until blue, and put it in a witches brew but I won't want that recipe.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/13/2023 10:10:00 AM

Oh my, this was a scary read indeed, a bit haunting for me cus yes mice are mischievous. You've crafted this in a very creative and captivating way, quite interestingly worded too! Loved reading this first poem by your artistic quill dear and would love to read more definitely! - Hiya :)

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 9/13/2023 12:23:00 PM

Dear Hiya, Thanks for the visit and your kind words, much appreciated.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 10:44:00 PM

I love this, so well written. I have had terrible encounters with them Mice, they scare me so much. Haha. Having cats can be helpful I heard. I love how you’ve ended the poem. Im sure. You are such a creative storyteller

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 9/13/2023 5:20:00 AM

Hi Ink, I have a creek behind my home which keeps my cat quite busy some days. I appreciate your kind words and thanks for the visit.

David Fisher

Date: 9/12/2023 4:42:00 PM

This is a good one, and hooray for your gifted friend.

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 9/13/2023 5:21:00 AM

HI David, It's nice to hear from you and also that you liked this little write. Have a wonderful day.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/12/2023 1:43:00 PM

I love meese, er mice! My wife, not so much

Nancy Kaufman
Date: 9/13/2023 5:22:00 AM

I'll be happy to send them your way Tom. LOL Thanks for the laugh and the visit.