She Did It Again

It was dead on arrival,
no chance of survival,
the tiny brown mouse.
She did it again,
my cat gifting friend,
at least it's not loose in the house..
Be it mouse or shrew,
would make a potent rodent stew, but
not so appealing to me.
Stir it until  blue,
and put it in a witches brew
but I won't want that recipe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 13, 2023 at 10:10 AM
Oh my, this was a scary read indeed, a bit haunting for me cus yes mice are mischievous. You've crafted this in a very creative and captivating way, quite interestingly worded too! Loved reading this first poem by your artistic quill dear and would love to read more definitely! - Hiya :)
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September 13, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Dear Hiya, Thanks for the visit and your kind words, much appreciated.
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September 12, 2023 at 10:44 PM
I love this, so well written. I have had terrible encounters with them Mice, they scare me so much. Haha. Having cats can be helpful I heard. I love how you’ve ended the poem. Im sure. You are such a creative storyteller
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September 13, 2023 at 5:20 AM
Hi Ink, I have a creek behind my home which keeps my cat quite busy some days. I appreciate your kind words and thanks for the visit.
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September 12, 2023 at 4:42 PM
This is a good one, and hooray for your gifted friend.
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September 13, 2023 at 5:21 AM
HI David, It's nice to hear from you and also that you liked this little write. Have a wonderful day.
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