She Dances With Spirits

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YOUR CHOICE E Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Honorable Mention


The wind brushes her red mane wild and untamed, lifting her gown
A trance sweeps and sways her figure while bright orbs surround her
Transported to other realms where forestry scenes blend far away 
A wistful lean body revealed thru a sheer dress, she is lifted into thin air
As she twirls around to celestial sounds, with spirits she dances free
In this pipe dream phantasy I imagined it were me, on this blissful day

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Date: 3/27/2025 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Very creative. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 3/27/2025 3:20:00 PM
Ty Sara! I appreciate your support ~
Date: 7/13/2023 8:13:00 AM
lovely write enjoyed reading your work
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Date: 7/13/2023 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Yolanda. It's nice to have you back!
Date: 7/3/2023 7:40:00 PM
Anaya, your work is truly remarkable, it captures the essence of beauty with such vivid imagery and mesmerizing movement. The dance exudes a sheer vitality that is simply unparalleled. In crafting this blissful scene, you have ingeniously portrayed the exquisite grace of the human form and its elegant gestures, resulting in a magnificent poem.
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Date: 7/13/2023 8:56:00 AM
I'm so grateful for your comments. You let me know that I have achieved a blissful and graceful scene and that means so much to me. Thank you, Sotto Poet for your support :)
Date: 7/3/2023 7:54:00 AM
Loved your ethereal poem…the red hair and green twirling gown.
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Date: 7/13/2023 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! Ethereal indeed! To perfect for this world, phantasm.
Date: 7/2/2023 11:31:00 PM
How lovely, to dance with spirits in forestry sounds wonderful. Enjoyed the read Anaya… Belle
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Date: 7/12/2023 10:43:00 AM
It does sound like a nice phantasy. We may have not danced in a forest with spirits but we've danced somewhere and know the feelings it brings on, Belle. Thank you for your read!
Date: 7/2/2023 9:54:00 AM
Lovely image and a wonderful poem highlighting her beautiful body and graceful movements. In her gossamer gown, long hair and thin body, she looks a beautiful Goddess. Well done Anaya !
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Date: 7/12/2023 10:41:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Art prompts me to write. Just one look at the beautiful floating woman inspired my senses and opened my eyes to the realms of phantasy. You obviously saw the same!
Date: 7/2/2023 7:53:00 AM
Dear Anaya, may you dance blissfully with the spirits. How can one not admire such imagery? Graceful and amazing are the emotions you conjure.
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Date: 7/12/2023 10:40:00 AM
I do, in my fantasies I am a dancer. One look at the beautiful floating woman inspired my senses and opened my eyes to the realms of phantasy. Thank you!
Date: 7/2/2023 5:46:00 AM
Wow ! This is beautiful Anaya, the images so clear and the movement and vitality of the dance is superb. You created a blissful scene. BOL in the contest, This will do well. Its really delightful.
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Date: 7/12/2023 10:37:00 AM
Thank you, S.V. Art prompts me to write. Just one look at the beautiful floating woman inspired my senses and opened my eyes to the realms of phantasy.
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