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He Watches

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Written June 20, 2023
Poetry/Verse/he watches
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1556-665-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Free Bride Dance photo and picture

 

as she dances and she glances
beyond her shoulder 
she peers 
looking back
with her beautiful smile- 
she poses in the mirror

in the shadows
he watches her twirl
then, he steps forward
crushing her to him
whispering her name-
as they kiss

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Jan Allison
Date: 6/23/2023 8:17:00 AM
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what lovely romantic lines Constance, I do like this challenge its simple yet so effective adding just 20 words:-) hugs Han xx
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Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2023 8:36:00 AM
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Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, hugs !
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Valsa George
Date: 6/21/2023 9:21:00 AM
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So very romantic ! The picture is mesmerizing ! All the Best dear Constance .
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Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2023 10:08:00 AM
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Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the image and thanks for the encouragement !

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