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Written June 20, 2023
Poetry/Verse/he watches
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1556-665-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Free Bride Dance photo and picture

as she dances and she glances beyond her shoulder she peers looking back with her beautiful smile- she poses in the mirror in the shadows he watches her twirl then, he steps forward crushing her to him whispering her name- as they kiss

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Date: 6/23/2023 8:17:00 AM
what lovely romantic lines Constance, I do like this challenge its simple yet so effective adding just 20 words:-) hugs Han xx
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Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2023 8:36:00 AM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, hugs !
Date: 6/21/2023 9:21:00 AM
So very romantic ! The picture is mesmerizing ! All the Best dear Constance .
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Date: 6/21/2023 10:08:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and the image and thanks for the encouragement !

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