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She was alone, than he came by She felled in love, and he made her cry. She thought he was the one, but he told her lies She thought his heart she had won, but he never told her what was the prize Now she cries every night knowing her soul has died His out of her sight but he took her pride She's mad, she's sad She's crying, she's dying ..She is ME!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/29/2011 6:47:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Luz. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2011 8:58:00 PM
A touchy poignant tale of betrayal, Luz
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