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She makes her way onto the streets. Her lashes are fixed on. Neon pink her lipstick is. Her blush is “Sudden Dawn.” Thigh-high is the dress she wears, and high-heeled are her shoes. Her smile is forced, but unconcerned are men she can’t refuse. Her Mack Daddy will see to it she doesn’t lag behind. Her shield is he, but little kindness in him can she find. He found her a few months ago when she was all alone. He called her special. She’s just one more whore of his to own. His love and comfort were a lure to make her feel secure. Lurid acts with perverts she’s now made to endure. She’s looking hot, but she’s not what folks think her to be. Look closer; ask her questions. Only then you’ll see . . . She fled a house of violence ending up in the same scene. This “woman” folks pass judgment on is but a girl thirteen.

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Date: 1/5/2025 1:36:00 PM
It is a pleasure to read your exquisite poetry, which is constantly brimming with texture, fragrance, and passion. Your work is just stunning. Congratulations on your contest win, Andrea
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 5:45:00 PM
Thanks, Sotto
Date: 1/5/2025 8:19:00 AM
Very emotional poem. You can take on any topic or issue and turn it into a classic masterpiece. Congrats on second… you were a baby breath away from first. Please write for my next contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 8:29:00 AM
always a breath away. haha. Thanks, Robert.
Date: 1/5/2025 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet, Cheers!!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 8:29:00 AM
thanks, Thriveni.
Date: 12/18/2024 7:33:00 AM
Andrea, I agree with Duke. This is compelling. Such a beautiful, but sad poem.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 8:29:00 AM
thanks so much, Mike.
Date: 12/17/2024 10:47:00 AM
Andrea, a compelling story of how abuse flows from one scene to another. It's an awful truth how much bad goes on in this world. Sad really. You expose it all with honesty and directness. I'm trying to think how we can stop it. How do we extend dignity to everyone? It's not an easy task. It's an excellent topic to ponder for the end of the year. Hope you have a great holiday and new year!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/5/2025 8:31:00 AM
what a horrible man you described, Duke. I know many women raise their boys the same as their girls. It always surprises me how often the boys end up like this. Some girls become pretty bad too, but in the world, good women outnumber good men. I would love to see this change one day.
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 12/17/2024 11:40:00 AM
Andrea, that will take some doing to modify behavior like that. I wonder what % of men have used a prostitute at some point in their lives. I never have, but I can only imagine that the desire for sex on the part of some may be difficult to deal with constructively. It will take a huge cultural shift that begins with an understanding of the dehumanizing and awful effects of sex trafficking. Empathy can go a long way, but we have a large number of people and men missing that quality. I did know a guy who went on foreign sex trips. He was a horrible person I couldn't stand. I suggested he be removed from his position, but our employer refused to do anything. The guy was a real monster who liked to brag about his behavior.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/17/2024 11:23:00 AM
We can never change the situation as long as there are sick men who are willing to sleep with young girls. It's a very tragic thing. I pray for those souls who are searching for kidnapped girls and women and little boys as well. It happens world-wide, but Americans are the biggest culprits.
Date: 12/17/2024 9:51:00 AM
It say's a lot I read it like a movie. Makes onw wonder, Is their a missing poster with her face on it.
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Date: 12/15/2024 2:42:00 PM
Powerful write really sad! You give us view into reality for this poor teen. Great job poet!
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:10:00 AM
Quite a sad verse Andrea, it's a tragic world we live in. Tom
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Date: 12/15/2024 9:49:00 AM
Dear sweet andrea, iv seen and read about such situations and also about such streets and red light districts and it is truly so heart wrenching and sad. Your ending is powerful! And i actually wanted to write sometime ago on this song too but i didnt do it. I bet this will score high! Best wishes. Hope you are doing well! Sending you light always
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Date: 12/14/2024 7:23:00 PM
Thesis on the phenomenon is found in research paper academic and cold exposing trafficking of human banality. Andrea this piece highlight the grip on society this evil has, somehow maintaining high consumption. The imagery is compelling.
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Date: 12/14/2024 2:54:00 PM
Wow, I did not expect the end. This is a tragic story, and you can really feel your empathy for her.
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Date: 12/14/2024 8:12:00 AM
Hi Andrea, it's heartbreaking knowing what these young girls are going through, the so called men who use them are the scum of the earth. xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/14/2024 11:23:00 PM
So true, John
Date: 12/14/2024 2:20:00 AM
So sad these gir3s are lured into into a devastating lifestyle which if they are lucky they will live through. . You describe this so thoroughly and realistically my friend. So well penned. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 12/13/2024 5:55:00 PM
This is a tragic reality that young unfortunate girls go through every day, and it's just heart-wrenching that instead of going to school normally and reading books leisurely, they are robbed of their innocence young..
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Date: 12/13/2024 11:38:00 AM
Such an awful fate for so many young girls who think they can run away and find a better life, only to find one equally bad or worse. You’ve described this very sad situation brilliantly, Andrea…
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Date: 12/13/2024 10:29:00 AM
The sad plight of a lady of the night, who is but a child abused by a life of violence.
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Date: 12/13/2024 10:02:00 AM
Sad. Some of the girls have to go through this.
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