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Sharing the Wealth

Over the interstate driving fast To my sister’s house I drove Lights had been hung - by professionals done There were fir trees in a grove Hey! Where is the meaning in Christmas, Sis? She pointed to all her gold She’d so much wealth now, I wondered how Her heart was so mean and cold Ho! It boggled my mind how those outside Needed badly to be fed But sis like a fool with her priceless jewels Could not spare a slice of bread *Based on “Over the River and Through the Woods” Inspired by my sister.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/22/2011 8:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Carolyn. It's too bad your sister doesn't understand the true meaning of Christmas. She may have a change of heart someday. Congrats on your win. Kim
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Date: 12/20/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulation, my friend, on your win. bl
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Date: 12/20/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations, what a shame. happy holidays x
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Date: 12/19/2011 4:45:00 PM
I was hoping that Sis had a change of heart. Congratulations on your write about her. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2011 3:48:00 PM
* "I Remember Coming By To View This Precious Loving Poem The Day That Your Treasures Had Posted Its Light * My Dear Precious & Priceless, Beautiful Carolyn * Twas Taking Away Amid Comming Upon Its Bittersweet Reflections * Was Reminded of Lazarus & The Rich Man Story Told By * Jesus Christ * From The Book of Luke * You Are A Beautiful Poetess & Your Loving Heart Is Even More Beautiful Than This * Love The Light * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 12/1/2011 11:40:00 AM
Well you have put out a good scribe here Carolyn,, its seems to me whole swathes of nations have become slaves to over-consumtion:) blessings over the coming season..
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Date: 12/1/2011 11:24:00 AM
This is so true. I watch the shows on rich peoples homes and wonder how some could become so selfish. They will spend 500,000 on an ornament yet not see the needy beyond their door. Maybe I would change if I had money but I don't so-- I do not see the reasoning behind buying over priced items. my mom said I would give everything away so I would never have to worry about ever being rich. love phyl
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:39:00 PM
I appreciate your feelings..but one has to save something for the rainy day too..thanx for stopping by, luv, jag
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Date: 11/30/2011 6:42:00 PM
Some folks are like that, people who write poetry can't possibly be among them. Truth in a nutshell Carolyn!
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Date: 11/30/2011 3:07:00 PM
Do you suppose your sister needs to read dickens' Christmas Carol? You are so clever. I'm saving this one. Love, daver
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:57:00 PM
I am saying a prayer for her. Maybe something with three ghosts.
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:17:00 PM
Heartfelt piece, my friend. I'm sorry your sister is so cold
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