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Shape Shift - Redtail Hawk

An ancient redwood, I gaze up and beyond a Redtail floats , freedom , love perhaps I'll climb leap into flight.....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2011 6:52:00 PM

climb a redwood and then leap like the redtail hawk into the sky. Two glorious images together. what is not to like? Congrats on this win, Rick.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 10:13:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/3/2011 9:24:00 AM

Congrats Rick on another spectacular win with one of your very first poems luv.. enjoy my friend.. happy weekend...

Skat A

Date: 6/3/2011 7:09:00 AM

congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2011 8:54:00 AM

It would be one awesome leap to fly like that. And shape shift right into one! Now I am going back to your final page as I've run out of things to see on the first one! But that's ok. I always find great delights of my poetry friends when I see their first posts!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/19/2010 2:44:00 PM

I can see it clearly. One day it will spread its wings. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph

Daver Austin

Date: 6/19/2010 9:18:00 AM

Yep! The redwoods will do it to ya...so lost you can't even see the sky. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/18/2010 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Rick. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/15/2010 12:12:00 PM

This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke

John Freeman

Date: 6/15/2010 7:41:00 AM

Congrats. Rick on your great poem being featured this week. Agape, Moses

Janette Fisher

Date: 6/14/2010 1:06:00 PM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/14/2010 12:37:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/14/2010 11:04:00 AM

This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/13/2010 7:31:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your featured write. Vince

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/12/2010 5:20:00 PM

HAWK - is the messenger. IT is also about visionary power and guardianship, the hawk is very protective of the young in its nest. It teaches us about providing for family and self. Hawk teaches us to be observant and to pay attention to what we may overlook. This could mean a talent we don't use, a blessing for which we haven't expressed gratitude, or a message from Spirit. The hawk has keen eyesight, it is about opening our eyes and seeing that which is there to guide us.