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Shape of Water

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liquid water has no shape of its own in a cup, it's a cup in a spoon it's a spoon but it ripples with delight when prodded or gets tickled with a drop or drip. the wind caresses it into waves sustainable till dashed on shore with splash and spray, bubbles and foam, drawn back to amorphous ooze content to remained constrained and contained, happily within But water vapor has shape puffed into clouds aloft aloof in the sky and wispy steam wafts, fluffs and spirals in air like waving gossamer threads and of course there is snow and ice which have shapes of their own. touch them and you know it's water in pain wanting in agony to be shapeless

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Date: 6/20/2021 8:38:00 PM
That's a unique way of thinking, great personification too, John:)
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John Anderson
Date: 6/20/2021 8:56:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Cheers
Date: 6/12/2021 9:41:00 PM
So nice. Thought-provoking. Sounds like a winner to me!
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