Shameless

So many weep from pleasure or from pain
and raise their invocations to the sky.
I watch them from the corner of my eye.
Their exhibitions I would likely feign 
to match expression shown when masses cry.
My eyes, instead, might blur.  I gasp or sigh,
and sometimes I despond when under strain.
But rarely am I vassal to the guilt
that others I’ve observed are prone to claim.
Of slower-melting metal I was built.
By keeping cool, I suffer less from shame
than those who feel too much.  They often wilt.
A gift or curse?  I rarely feel to blame.

For Frank Herrera's  WHAT MIGHT THEY FIND THERE
(I've noticed I do not suffer so much from feelings of guilt as some of my friends do. I think it has to do with basic personality types)
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Salehi Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 1:54 AM
A wonderful poem ..... very nice...good for you my dear.
Arnone Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Stay strong, Andrea. Inspiring sonnet. :-)
Lawless Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Hey, Andrea, I once saw a bumper sticker that read SCREW GUILT......nice bit of work with the sonnet for the contest.
Austin Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Keep a clear head. Stay hip. You be a child of the cool generation. This be cool in the best sense of the word. You be warm. Love, Dave
Lane Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Forgiving is the easy part, forgetting? Not so much but a task that must be done. By being who you are, Andrea, you can water yourself with a clear conscience if you begin to wilt. Very enlightening sonnet.
La France Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Andrea, this poem is so deep, sadly I suffer all the time and I tend to dwell on things ~
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Remind me not to make you mad. Good one Andrea...
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:40 PM
You probably weren't raised in a Catholic home. *lol*
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:34 PM
You probably don't know what it's like to be raised Mormon. LOL
A   Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Andrea, I like your view , never be the vassal to any guilt. I can relate to some parts of your poem. So glad, I am back reading all my favorite poets, plus others once again. A 7 lovely lady LINDA :)
Lane Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:32 AM
I'm right there with both of you. Andrea told me of my colors. Nice to see you, PD.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Yes, sweetie. You and I know ourselves very well. You love fun. I bet you have "yellow" in your personality like I do.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:13 PM
that's from Hartman's personality test where he labels personality types by colors.
Yvonne Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:55 PM
BTW I feel guilty so easily I even knock on an oyster before I open it!
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:12 PM
I kind of figured about you. You are definitely a blue personality from what I know of you, Armand. Very loving and sensitive too.
Yvonne Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Sounds like you would of made a great mafia contract hitman heeheehee! Great sonnet! Great write! A Fav (I wouldn't want to anger you in anyway considering your guiltless personality, heeheehee)
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:10 PM
hahaha. your comment really had me chuckling!! I'm not THAT bad!!!
Horsman Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:32 PM
always love your sonnets, and this one too!
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:40 PM
thanks, Harry.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:14 PM
That is what makes you a good teacher Andrea. I wrote...a great poem Andrea ....my kindle changed it to read: I Great Pond Landria. This kindle is easy to use and fast, but I have to correct it all the time! : ( 7
Warlov Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 5:57 AM
May I use "The Great Pond Landria" as a title?
Walker Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Hey sis, are you writing about me? Great insightful sonnet.
Warlov Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 6:04 AM
So... is a 'guilt-bone' the type that people pick at?
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:40 PM
haha. You WISH (I think you have a much bigger gulity bone than I ever did!!) LOVE YOU!
Anish Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:19 AM
This is a stimulating psychological poem. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:27 AM
thanks, Matt!
Raha Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:26 AM
You are a wonderful person Andrea,yes suffering from guilt is the biggest sin I guess,those who feel too much later go into depression in the later part of life,I have first-hand experience of this as I was a victim,but the good thing is I've now redeemed myself to a completely changed person,thanks to your poem that reassures my redemption.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Yes, my husband is the type that experiences much guilt. Therefore, he is always depressed. it's sad to me. It's difficult to overcome who we are. My flaw is laziness. How I hate housework!!
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 9:26 AM
You are very lucky with your outlook and approach to life Andrea - like the take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:27 AM
thanks, Jan. I feel lucky to be the way I am.
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