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It was the fun sound I was after eavesdropping on her sweet laughter. That sound brought an instant smile to my heart, for it meant that my sweet girl could soon be in my arms. I picture her like she was years ago, and soon, my impatient heart starts to race. It's been five long years since I saw her last; tears suddenly start streaming down my face. She had just turned three, my letters, where never read. Prison stole those years, now she's forgotten my face and that shame is killing me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/1/2018 8:16:00 PM
So heartfelt, Emile, congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate you visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/29/2018 5:44:00 PM
wow, you really made us feel like this unfortunate soul was you. Great emotive writing. I like how easy it is to read, Emile. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/30/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Andrea , I appreciate your continual support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/29/2018 5:04:00 PM
So much heartbreak in this world. A sad thing to face! Congrats on your emotional write!
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:36:00 AM
Emile, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this emotional write, it truly touched my heart, well done. I am really enjoying your book Fragmented Feelings, I am using it as a study guide . . . to create my own versions of your poems.
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Date: 4/29/2018 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/29/2018 8:23:00 AM
Emile, a wonderfully profound write. I wonder how often this scene plays out around the world every day.
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thanks so much James, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/29/2018 7:20:00 AM
Wow - quite the scenario. Well done, Emile. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:13:00 AM
Wow... I got chills when I realized... An excellent buildup and emotional expression. Congratulations on your win. It is a winner! Left me feeling so sad.
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Susan, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/5/2018 6:05:00 PM
oh Emile your poem sure packs a punch and sadly there are children and parents who are in this sad situation. the picture is heartbreaking in so many ways. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/4/2018 7:30:00 AM
Wow Emile! This is a powerful poem that hits the reader strongly. Well expressed and written as usual. Take care :)
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Date: 4/4/2018 10:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, your comments and encouragement are a treat to my heart my friend, Emile.

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