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An inconsiderate sun slowly sinks while sleep tries to avoid dreams of freezing. Steam from a sewer grate grants forty winks as he lays on it, coughing and wheezing. In his head, drums, the beat of passing feet and it's almost impossible to sleep. For that irritating sound is the street pulsating; shallow footsteps echo deep. Ignored and forgotten, he awaits day as the rats of hunger gnaw at his guts. And little by little, he wilts away; while stinging remarks add salt to his cuts. The morning finds his bedroll soaked in pee, for had he gotten up, he could have died. The night air was forty below, you see, so he held it in, or at least, he tried. Survival dictates a warm place to go, but he's viewed like an annoying splinter. And that insensitivity is so pervasive he faces death each winter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/25/2018 7:46:00 AM
This is so beautiful and so sad. Your way with words is such an inspiration to me!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/25/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Anna, I appreciate all your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 5/24/2018 3:07:00 PM
Awesome poem, Emile. You have such a gift when it comes to empathy. Well penned.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/24/2018 5:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, I'm grateful for all you do for me my friend, Emile

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