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SHALL WE DANCE Shall we dance, as two snakes encircling one another, A bite to the strike, whom draws the first blood of Passions bitter poison. Venomous vipers, engaged in a twisted game of hidden desires, Shielded by golden bands of confinements vows of promise, Yet yielding under the guise of the serpent’s folk tongue. Reptilian lovers Intertwining, beneath the light rays of the Elliptical moons illumination, deceiver’s side slithering, The truth of reality’s harsh dawning to come. Desert tempest creatures, crushed under the swelling Sand storms of destiny, rising in the winds rip tidal shift Of exotic’s throngs of passion, then dashed upon the Rocks of calamity’s destructive force. Behold the skins of shame, we’ve shed in this our lost Garden of paradise called Eden, as we descend limb By limb, unraveling, retanggling, in a mutual enticement’s Partaking of the unripen fruit, in this the harvested Orchard of deceit, and lies of pleasure spoils. Rattling’s bad to the bone species, are these Deceiver’s dwelling under the moonlight, Loves vanquished, by passions burnt embers Of lusts cold blooded flame. Veracity’s fiercest retile's in mortal combat With their human hearts, or their raw physical Basic instincts, the animal within themselves, The beast of desire, exposing the coiling in raptures After glow of the exotic. In the emerald eyes of the snakes flashing, these Are the transfixed, paralyzed prisoners of loves Passionate vipers, the cursed of the forbidden. Poisons intoxicated figures, silhouetted in the red Moons seduction zone, he the hooded king cobra, And I his empress taipan of the orient. Glittering do our scales of temptation, damnation, Oh but to die in this incoilment’s display of eternal Abandonment, a climatic apex of poisonous predators, Ripping, tarring at their bare exposed fleshes Atonement, unsheived are these carnivores Of passion. Shall we dance, as two snakes encircling one another, A bite to the strike, whom draws the first blood Of passions bitter poison. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/9/2015 11:18:00 AM
Dear Cherl, this is surely one of your best poems! Excellent, beautiful and captivating. Metaphors and imagery play a main part in this snake dance which exudes passion and desire. It merits a top rating and a fav! // paul
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:06:00 PM
oh my, that's epic enough... WOW! The images above gave the poem, a whole different dance. I can't stand snakes at all. LOL, however, I love the passion, and vows of promises you sway on this page. A huge 7 from me to you. Enjoyed,,, LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:36:00 AM
This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!
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