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Shall We Dance?

this smile this smile i send to you rolling with the sun sommersaulting fun shining beams of smiles coming there for you. this hug this hug i send to you crystal raindrops falling down ,till they find your town! shower hugs for you. this kiss this kiss i send to you hundred kisses floating on a silver cloud to your juicy mouth sweet kisses for you. my verse my verse i send to you flying up so high reaching for the sky twinkling through the stars verse of missing you this girl this girl i dream to be there soon through my mr moon, just give me your hand together on our land universe just for me and you. --------------------------------------------------------charma

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/25/2009 3:28:00 PM

Uplifting wonderful write, Charma. Vince

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/24/2009 11:09:00 PM

Charmaine! I didn't even see your poem Shall We Dance until just now, how wonderful!!! This is brilliant, bubbly, sweet, wonderful and just what I needed to see (I was just praying, preparing... and now I can proceed. J.Jamison) Blessings my friend and many hugs, this is a fave!

James Peranteau

Date: 5/21/2009 4:01:00 AM

Simply amazing Charmaine ! This is the romantic lure,....I just love this poem ! james

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/21/2009 12:04:00 AM

Wow! This is beautiful Charma! =) so glad that you are so nice and an awesome writer! Honored I am to have you read my work! Truly you are an amazing person! - jeremiah

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/20/2009 1:16:00 PM

Charma, you are pure liquid magic, in every quest I seek the fantasy of you ... being such a friend, talented, original, mischievous, profound, and always motivating ... cloud 9 is your company. Peace, thanks and love

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/19/2009 9:25:00 PM

Love your creativity here Charmaine, you always have an interesting pen.

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/19/2009 8:15:00 PM

A refreshing format. nice use of repetition.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/19/2009 5:06:00 PM

lovely format ...sweet words...all Charma!!!! I sent you mail...Jim

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/19/2009 4:55:00 PM

I had to come back and read this write one more time..some magical words dripping in this write...makes the heart sigh....I enjoyed it even more the second time...be well my friend.

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/19/2009 4:36:00 PM

if only i had a friend to send me such love you are a wonderfully sweet writer and you make me smile

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 4:35:00 PM

Enchanting, beautiful, dreamy. Sigh. Too lovely. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/19/2009 4:29:00 PM

Soup mail my friend.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/19/2009 4:28:00 PM

This is a terrific write filled with love and awe...I smiled and loved every minute of the poem that flows from a beautiful heart.. you write love very well my friend..your heart overflows with it and it shines in your writing...hope your heart is smiling with happiness....Chris.

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 5/19/2009 4:18:00 PM

Freaking awesome! What a master piece of verse. Each one can be their own little poem. Excellent, brillant.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/19/2009 4:05:00 PM

Very good flow. I like it a lot! Nate