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Shall It Be Today

Shall it be today? Amongst a crowd I love, yet hardly know, Shall you enter my solitary gate? Or will I sigh with sinking heart and soul, Knowing you hold the key, But have never known it. . . Tell me one thing - shall it be today? Will I lift my head to see you there, With sparkling eye and beaming face, Like long ago, when oblivion surrounded me, And forced open my gates for my own good, Fusing two different minds together I ask yet again - shall it be today? Patience for years has brought me more than tears, For well I know you will be away once more, And the chance for your sunshine flees fast, Making way for clouds of suspended gloom - Reminding me once more, nothing we speak, -Though we are in the same room! Shall it be today! My love, my friend, my light! Most pass my entrance with averted eye, Yet somehow I feel you lingering by. . . At a distance still, I feel you move closer As tomorrow grows ever bolder Be today, be my rock that I cling to See my hand reach for you, and take it I will whisper what you have always known. . . And you will know where His hand has shown Agape love forever in present's grasp ---- Agape - greek term; the highest of the four types of love in the Bible ; - sacrificial love that is unconditional

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Date: 4/14/2016 1:16:00 AM
I so loved the gentle tone of this one ... it flowed very smoothly reminding of the old poems where a lot of effort was put into meter and subtlety of language. The love in this piece felt so genuine, Laura. The first stanza had some of the strongest lines for me ... "Shall you enter into my solitary gate" "Knowing you hold the key but have never known it" Such beautiful lines that express this man's affect on you. There's a crack opening up on your shell, Laura. And light is peeking through :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/14/2016 6:26:00 PM
Haha, now you're seeing my obsessive side, going into these older writes.. I had a lot of poems about this person. I was probably unhealthily infatuated now that I think about it...yeah... it was a mess, but, thank you so so much for reading. Still trying to implement agape love in my life..it's been a journey, that's for sure. ~Laura
Date: 11/14/2014 7:02:00 PM
Beautifully penned. "Shall it be today!" I hope it will be everyday for you deserve it. The love of His light is in your heart. It shines through your eyes and manifests itself in your soul. Your are a gift to us all. Thank you my friend. ~Kilmer
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Date: 10/13/2014 8:38:00 PM
what an amazing beautiful piece of writing laura excellent pen
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Date: 10/13/2014 2:20:00 PM
Where hands meet and whispers greet a love so very replete. Agape, an awe for love's sake Laura. You strongly express a bond undeniable, " My Love, my Friend, my Light..." Beautiful Laura...J.A.B. I love how you provide the root meaning of sacrificial love, a lesson for the heart!
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Date: 10/11/2014 8:24:00 AM
You have a very big heart!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/11/2014 9:18:00 PM
Only wished he knew my heart is his. Thanks Duke.... thanks for the sweetness.... I needed it tonight...~Laura

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