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Shall I--Must I

Shall I compare you to a star, the brightest in the nighttime sky? Must I admire you from afar while time so precious rushes by? Will I forever wonder why my heart bears harsh rejection’s scar, or will you someday venture nigh and taste how sweet my kisses are? January 30, 2020 Contest Title: Oh--No a Twisted Char-Lay Placed 2nd Sponsor: Charles Messina February 19, 2020, entered in the Strand Select U Contest

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Date: 2/16/2020 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful lay poem here, Janice. Love the metaphor of star for that kind of unapproachable longing we feel towards a special someone. Well done and congrats ~ John
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2020 10:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, John. Janice
Date: 2/16/2020 4:42:00 PM
Love that pointed question there, Janice. Congratulations on a great winner in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2020 10:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice
Date: 2/16/2020 1:05:00 PM
I love the ending to this, Janice. Congrats on your win! Charlie
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2020 10:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie, for sponsoring and for my placement. Janice
Date: 1/31/2020 4:19:00 PM
Hello Janice … yearning romance makes your poem as sweet as your kisses Janice - lovely Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/31/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thanks a million, Lindsay! Janice
Date: 1/31/2020 7:50:00 AM
WOW! This is just awesome, Janice--enjoyed it from start to finish--quest of love resonates!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/31/2020 10:32:00 AM
Thanks SO MUCH, Vijay. Janice

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