Shaken

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So sad to the garden in disarray after many days of unending rain!

the koi shaken from the Summer deluge — deserted garden 8/3/2018

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/5/2018 3:58:00 PM

One person's deluge is another's wish (out west with all the wildfires!) such sad image "deserted garden"-

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2018 4:30:00 PM

For sure on both points!

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/5/2018 10:59:00 AM

So Sorry, best wishes...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/5/2018 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/4/2018 2:05:00 AM

How true! Have witnessed it, not a pretty sight!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2018 10:22:00 AM

It was so sad. Brought visitors. Didn’t even look the same :( sad face...