Shadows In Motion
Inspired by the painting Shadows In Motion
by Ewa Czarniecka
Which shows people walking in heavy rain. The pallette used is all subdued colours mainly focussing on greys and blacks. The ground looks shiny and wet. Some people have umbrellas, others don't. They are all shadowy. It appears to be evening, possibly twilight.
The dark edges of the picture
Define the mood
Needing to be
Anywhere but here
Projections of self already home and dry
Despite the rain
Not all shelter
Some tread on with sodden clothes
Knowing this is just part of a journey
Just a day, in a life
Undefining
As a moment
Others reflect the timing
They are the ones to be rained on
Are you caught in the beam of light
Or shackled to the dark shadows
Overall, even on this day
There is more light than dark
Walking in the rain
Is part of the experience of life
Captured in the middle of something
Greater than yourself
See how the people, break up the shadows
And the light
Though the rain removes traces of them all
WIP
Copyright © Di11y Da11y | Year Posted 2023
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