Shadows

Could spectres conceal inscrutable plot, 
while following lives with clandestine eyes:  
mocking each movement with grace we have not.  

Caste-less company of foolish and wise, 
elusive and tireless, always impend: 
fleet, ever positioned to criticize.  

Noiselessly waiting at each journey's end 
watching and judging, without acquittal, 
deeds that we're proud of, and some to defend.  

Their aloofness lessens us, belittles 
as around all they swoop, dread silent crows, 
and yet are scattered like children's skittles  

when darkness descends with one immense blow,  
for night is queen of secrets and shadows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 1:02 AM
I like this one Perry! Kind of leaning on the dark and mysterious but that's the way me likes them sometimes dear friend.;; lol... Enjoyed your terza rima as it is. A 7 for you! Enjoy the day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Thank you, Dorian.
Roper Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Good wirte, Perry, concealing secrets we all tend to do. Blessings eve
Mcdaid Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Thanks, Eve.
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