Shadows

A setting evening sun displays thy silhouette on caftan dress,
Reminding of thy same shadow formed by a morning sun.
Sun painted by morning or evening light  thou art my love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 5/7/2011 9:49:00 PM
Beautiful, William, Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 5/7/2011 12:32:00 PM
Wonderful to read. Congrats on your win, william.
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Date: 5/5/2011 8:18:00 PM
awesome... best congrats for the surefire win! :) hugggs!
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Date: 5/5/2011 3:42:00 PM
What a fabulous image you painted, William. Congratulations on your win in the Sweet Sijo contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/4/2011 1:04:00 PM
Nice Sijo here, the first line has been so beautifully penned , enjoyed it..Congrats on your win William..gautami
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Date: 5/4/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations William on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:31:00 AM
Nice one William! I think 'setting' in your first line is a typo and should hav been certain. Hope dat's right? Thanks for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 8th place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, wish you all the best. Adeleke
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:29:00 AM
William, it's great to see you in the top ten. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:29:00 AM
congrats to you..I lovel poems about shadows..beautiful. BG
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congrats Will on your wonderful winning poem in Sweet Sijo contest with this excellent entry my friend.. hope u are doing well.. enjoy your special win with luv..
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Adeleke, William
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Date: 3/31/2011 11:40:00 PM
Sweet sijo!!
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Date: 3/31/2011 7:27:00 PM
Shadows reflect the heat of the dawning day, and refract the waning light of the ending day. A nice, exposition on the stalking shadows!
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Date: 3/31/2011 6:45:00 PM
Very beautiful, William, Harry
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Date: 3/31/2011 5:41:00 PM
Nice sijo on shadows with apt expressions, William
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Date: 3/31/2011 3:42:00 PM
Going back to days of old. I love the Old English style. I am not so familiar with this type, but it is short and sweet, thanks for sharring Judy
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Date: 3/31/2011 3:41:00 PM
Going back to days of old. I love the Old English style. I am not so familiar with this type, but it is short and sweet, thanks for sharring and I will check it out, i like different types of poems. thanks for sharring. Judy
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