Shadows

like nocturnal bats shadows batter my window~ unfurling visions Nov.4.2022 ~ Honorable Mention~ A New Haiku, Footle, Tanka Standard Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/16/2022 4:06:00 PM

Deep thoughts and wonderful imagery, Valsa. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I hope you have a joyful week, my dear friend. Bill

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2022 3:41:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Valsa ~

Len Gasun

Date: 11/13/2022 1:55:00 AM

Marvelous imagery my dear friend Valsa. Congratulations on your win and this great haiku! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/10/2022 7:07:00 AM

Nice one Valsa. I like the imagery. Congratulations your win! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2022 1:55:00 PM

Back with congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2022 8:22:00 AM

Wow!! Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/5/2022 10:43:00 AM

It's a great haiku, Valsa. Loved the image! BW ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/4/2022 2:46:00 PM

Great imagery in such a short poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/4/2022 11:25:00 AM

Hello Valsa, everything has a shadow. Our shadows follows us evrywhere we go. Some outdoors shadows changes shapes. Hugs Blessings.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/4/2022 10:55:00 AM

The dark side always gets one's attention! Aloha!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/4/2022 9:15:00 AM

A stunning image Valsa, best of luck in the contest. Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/4/2022 8:10:00 AM

Such a wonderful haiku, Valsa. You conveyed a magnificent picture of bats batting your window. Enjoyed reading this, dear Valsa, Best wishes for the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2022 7:23:00 AM

oh, I really like this, Valsa.