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Just finger play above his head, three little brothers in a bed; light shafts beam, shadows command, of airplane flight on ceiling spanned. So great a love, this brother bond, the brand of love that goes beyond what mortal man asks of others, answered only in a brother. The sun will turn incessant rounds, to rise one day on battlegrounds that cover earth and sky and sea . . . where little boys should never be. That tiny one, the baby son, who crowed with glee at childish fun is caught in flash of light between the crosshairs of an M16, and those two older boys would give their own sweet lives if he could live. November 18, 2017

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Date: 12/2/2017 6:44:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest with a great write ,Faye, this left me emotional . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/2/2017 2:27:00 PM
Stunning, Faye! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2017 7:35:00 AM
Serious sucker-punch ending for this one, Faye. Artfully, but emotionally, done! Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Date: 11/19/2017 2:19:00 PM
What can I say but "war is hell" and losing a son or daughter to a rifle shot is devastating. I doubt if time can ever end that misery. Beautiful couplets and so poignant.
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Date: 11/18/2017 7:54:00 PM
gosh, what a twist at the end, Faye. what impact this one has!!! I hope you score high!
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Date: 11/18/2017 6:53:00 PM
Tears, tears.
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Date: 11/18/2017 4:04:00 PM
The ending took me by surprise...Well written Faye
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Date: 11/18/2017 4:01:00 PM
Oh! So sweet, so sad!! Well-written, Faye! Janice
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