Shadow Play

Just finger play above his head,
three little brothers in a bed;

light shafts beam, shadows command,
of airplane flight on ceiling spanned.

So great a love, this brother bond,
the brand of love that goes beyond

what mortal man asks of others,
answered only in a brother.

The sun will turn incessant rounds,
to rise one day on battlegrounds

that cover earth and sky and sea . . .
where little boys should never be.

That tiny one, the baby son,
who crowed with glee at childish fun

is caught in flash of light between
the crosshairs of an M16,

and those two older boys would give
their own sweet lives if he could live.

November 18, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:44 PM
Thank you for entering my contest with a great write ,Faye, this left me emotional . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Cozart Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Stunning, Faye! Congrats on your win.
Michaels Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Serious sucker-punch ending for this one, Faye. Artfully, but emotionally, done! Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.
Berggren Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 2:19 PM
What can I say but "war is hell" and losing a son or daughter to a rifle shot is devastating. I doubt if time can ever end that misery. Beautiful couplets and so poignant.
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 7:54 PM
gosh, what a twist at the end, Faye. what impact this one has!!! I hope you score high!
Wanter Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Tears, tears.
May Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:04 PM
The ending took me by surprise...Well written Faye
Canerdy Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Oh! So sweet, so sad!! Well-written, Faye! Janice
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