Shadow Puppets


Once, side by side, they walked the moonlit beach
     in silence- each alone and incomplete
in disjoined worlds- linked only by the reach
     of tiny, lapping waves upon their feet.

As silver beams of moonlight iced the ground
    and blotted out the heat of sandy gold,
their warmth of humanness was hidden- bound
     beneath blind souls that shivered in the cold.

Yet, on the sand, their shadows danced along-
     a silhouetted couple synchronized
in motion- forms united clear and strong
     against the blankness which the moon devised.

Dark shadow puppets sparked romantic light-
          gave living souls new vision in their night.


December 18,  2014

Shadow Puppets
~8th Place~
Premiere Contest: Silhouette
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Judged: 09/16/2017

Shadow Puppets
~7th Place~
Premiere Contest: Mid-June
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 06/15/2017

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Date: 9/17/2017 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your placement with a flowing poem.
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Date: 9/16/2017 7:16:00 PM
The poem is fabulous, congratulations on your awesome win,Sandra ... Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/16/2017 5:16:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write
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Date: 9/16/2017 12:45:00 PM
Hi Sandra, a very romantic picture you paint that deserves a contest placement once more!
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Date: 6/15/2017 10:41:00 AM
So beautiful and moving, Sandra! Congrats on your placement. My new favorite poem! Janice
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Date: 8/2/2016 11:33:00 AM
How nice to walking on the wet sand at this hour...I love doing this! :D Sunita
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Date: 8/2/2016 6:36:00 AM
Beautiful, romantic, artistic!! Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/2/2016 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations. I like the shadow puppets sparked my the moon. The moon in clear ambiguity.
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Date: 8/2/2016 1:01:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations. Mark
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Date: 8/2/2016 12:13:00 AM
How lovely Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! Well deservd my friend. ; ) xx
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Date: 8/1/2016 8:30:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet, congratulations Sandra...
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Date: 8/1/2016 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the second placement of the contest
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Date: 7/17/2016 5:57:00 PM
Sandra, Great Penned sonnet win.... SKAT
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Date: 6/7/2016 8:44:00 AM
A great poem, deserves the accolades.
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:30:00 AM
A great work all throughout Sandra! Congratulations! :) _Hans
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Date: 5/31/2016 8:24:00 AM
Sandra, Congrats again.. Check out the blog
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Date: 5/31/2016 12:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot, Sandra. ~karam~
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Date: 5/30/2016 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful sonnet and win. Love, Joyce
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/30/2016 7:15:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet....and happy to see you at the first place....congratulations Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Meenakshi, for your nice visit, uplifting comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/30/2016 6:47:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Sandra and congrats on your win. Mysterious and magical, romantic and aching, with nature as backdrop. Lovely thoughts and wonderfully rendered.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2016 9:28:00 PM
John, thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem and for your supportive comments. I appreciate it very much! Sandra
Date: 5/30/2016 6:12:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Sandra! Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for the nice comment, congrats, and Fav! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/30/2016 6:17:00 PM
just added to my favorites
Date: 5/30/2016 5:50:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Luloo! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/30/2016 4:42:00 PM
Unusual sonnet rhyme scheme! Congratulations on your win and many more to you!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thank you, Edlynn, for your supportive comment and congratulations! I appreciate it so much. Sandra
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 5/30/2016 4:43:00 PM
Oh I mean in rhyming suffixes! Nicely done!
Date: 5/30/2016 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on being #1. I listened to it over and over....
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/30/2016 3:43:00 PM
Hi, Janis, thank you so much for offering the great contest and for finding my poem worthy of the awesome placement! I nice surprise to just come home to from being out all day! Thanks again, Sandra
Date: 12/30/2014 9:28:00 AM
7 my dear, Congratulations on your win. Blessings and a Happy New Year
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/30/2014 3:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. I really appreciate your support. Best wishes to you and yours for the coming new year. Hugs, Sandra
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