Shadow Puppets


Once, side by side, they walked the moonlit beach
     in silence- each alone and incomplete
in disjoined worlds- linked only by the reach
     of tiny, lapping waves upon their feet.

As silver beams of moonlight iced the ground
    and blotted out the heat of sandy gold,
their warmth of humanness was hidden- bound
     beneath blind souls that shivered in the cold.

Yet, on the sand, their shadows danced along-
     a silhouetted couple synchronized
in motion- forms united clear and strong
     against the blankness which the moon devised.

Dark shadow puppets sparked romantic light-
          gave living souls new vision in their night.


December 18,  2014

Shadow Puppets
~8th Place~
Premiere Contest: Silhouette
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Judged: 09/16/2017

Shadow Puppets
~7th Place~
Premiere Contest: Mid-June
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 06/15/2017
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:39 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your placement with a flowing poem.
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 7:16 PM
The poem is fabulous, congratulations on your awesome win,Sandra ... Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write
Cornish Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Hi Sandra, a very romantic picture you paint that deserves a contest placement once more!
Canerdy Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 10:41 AM
So beautiful and moving, Sandra! Congrats on your placement. My new favorite poem! Janice
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 11:33 AM
How nice to walking on the wet sand at this hour...I love doing this! :D Sunita
Kimathi Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 6:36 AM
Beautiful, romantic, artistic!! Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Neumann Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Congratulations. I like the shadow puppets sparked my the moon. The moon in clear ambiguity.
Van Der Merwe Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations. Mark
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 12:13 AM
How lovely Sandra. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! Well deservd my friend. ; ) xx
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Wonderful sonnet, congratulations Sandra...
Negron Flores Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Congratulations Sandra on the second placement of the contest
A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Sandra, Great Penned sonnet win.... SKAT
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 8:44 AM
A great poem, deserves the accolades.
Selfa Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:30 AM
A great work all throughout Sandra! Congratulations! :) _Hans
Medders Tobechi Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Sandra, Congrats again.. Check out the blog
Misra Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 12:46 AM
Congratulations on your top spot, Sandra. ~karam~
Johnson Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful sonnet and win. Love, Joyce
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce. Hugs, Sandra
Raina Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Wonderful sonnet....and happy to see you at the first place....congratulations Sandra!
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:27 PM
Thank you, Meenakshi, for your nice visit, uplifting comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Watt Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Sandra and congrats on your win. Mysterious and magical, romantic and aching, with nature as backdrop. Lovely thoughts and wonderfully rendered.
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:28 PM
John, thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem and for your supportive comments. I appreciate it very much! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Sandra! Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for the nice comment, congrats, and Fav! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:17 PM
just added to my favorites
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Thank you very much, Luloo! Hugs, Sandra
Nau Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Unusual sonnet rhyme scheme! Congratulations on your win and many more to you!
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Thank you, Edlynn, for your supportive comment and congratulations! I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Nau Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Oh I mean in rhyming suffixes! Nicely done!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on being #1. I listened to it over and over....
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Hi, Janis, thank you so much for offering the great contest and for finding my poem worthy of the awesome placement! I nice surprise to just come home to from being out all day! Thanks again, Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 9:28 AM
7 my dear, Congratulations on your win. Blessings and a Happy New Year
Haight Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. I really appreciate your support. Best wishes to you and yours for the coming new year. Hugs, Sandra
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