Get Your Premium Membership

Shadow Dance

cast like fishing line from small to tall as green pine ghostly figure fine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/23/2024 9:10:00 PM
I love this senryu. A shadow seems to live in two different worlds.
Login to Reply
Jones Avatar
Karen Jones
Date: 6/24/2024 12:21:00 AM
A great observation Hilda! Thanks for sharing and for the love!
Date: 6/23/2024 6:58:00 PM
Nice Senryu
Login to Reply
Jones Avatar
Karen Jones
Date: 6/24/2024 12:19:00 AM
Thanks Joseph!
Date: 6/23/2024 11:04:00 AM
This is a deep one Karen... I take it that it is about a shadow that an be tall, but looks like a ghost...
Login to Reply
Jones Avatar
Karen Jones
Date: 6/23/2024 1:03:00 PM
Exactly Silent One! Thanks for reading!
Date: 6/23/2024 9:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Shadow Dance" write. Have a great day writing away.........................
Login to Reply
Jones Avatar
Karen Jones
Date: 6/23/2024 9:42:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading Paula!

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry