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Her being hangs on two faces of her mind, one overlooking the essentials and joy of life as those half-blind eyes reflect what she sees… is it that Shadow of obsession or power’s lure where temptation brews her world, reeling loosely into a charcoaled hole and onward through the never of her mind? The other face clutches moths’ kisses sweet its glow among dawn’s baby roses as her heart finds kindness in giving that flavors the potion of her sunlit dance and onward through the never of her mind. In agonizing braille of the dark, she crawls regaining awareness to mold one face, proud the shadowed one charged with venial sins… till Michael’s Light tramples a serpent’s pounce while baby roses lead the way, a most graceful of all choices in her world. and onward through the always of her mind. .................. Anthony Slausen's Gods and Devils Contest 1/18/2015

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Date: 2/1/2015 1:31:00 PM
nice win Nette. ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:01:00 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on your win. Awesome theme "Gods and Devil." Enjoy your day. Linda
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Date: 1/31/2015 8:35:00 AM
Hi nette: fantastic wordage . a real winner. Comngratulations! An Italian hug.
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:28:00 AM
Great lines with blesed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..
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Date: 1/23/2015 9:16:00 PM
I am happy to congratulate you on this worthy win nette. Today you have written another poem that will surely stand test of time; I am happy to be a living witness to this great one you did;congrats and may the Lord of host be with you...huggs
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Date: 1/23/2015 10:36:00 AM
Shadow and light...the good and the bad, brought to the foreground with metaphorical excellence. This is a worthy winner Nette!! #7 Congratulations. // paul
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Date: 1/23/2015 5:42:00 AM
Image and imagery are amazing nette - many congrats Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/22/2015 10:53:00 PM
Your poem and theme picture are awesome! Way to go Nette! ^_^
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Date: 1/22/2015 2:31:00 PM
A well deserved win, dear Nette !! My applause to you!
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:48:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Congratulations on your win, bette!
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Date: 1/22/2015 12:20:00 PM
Awesome Nette! Congrats on your 1st place win! LVerlena
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Date: 1/22/2015 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations for first place, a well dissevered honor, Emile. #7
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Date: 1/22/2015 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations, Nette, for your 1st Place win! This is so profound...the light and shadows within the soul...wonderfully written. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2015 7:35:00 AM
Congrats on win! Brilliant! Love nette>rajat
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Date: 1/20/2015 4:16:00 PM
so very beautiful Nette yes as Dave says a wow hugs 7
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Date: 1/18/2015 11:24:00 PM
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:38:00 PM
wow, amazing depiction of shadow vs. light with this metaphorical poem. Anthony will love it. I know that because he hates all my stuff and you write free verse mostly instead of rhyme!!
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:48:00 PM
Nette, your metaphorical nuances throughout this poem are nothing less than brilliant! Wish I could write like this. Your poem is right up his alley and is certain to be at the top. OUTSTANDING! #7
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Date: 1/18/2015 3:28:00 PM
Oh wonderful creation this is nette,,,good luck in contest...
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:45:00 PM
A wonderful contrast between shadows and light, Nette. We all are living proof of this write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:30:00 PM
- Really well written - Awesome !!!! - I hope your Sunday was lovely :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2015 8:18:00 AM
Excellent poem! A godly victory captured through your symbolism and indelible images, Nette.
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Date: 1/18/2015 8:14:00 AM
Though we both have the dark and light within us, you highlighted the triumph of the soul by dissecting both sides. A fave for me!
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Date: 1/18/2015 7:57:00 AM
An amazing interpretation nette...C--->A
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Date: 1/18/2015 5:12:00 AM
Interesting interpertation of the picture..That would be some more whirling mind..Sara
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