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Shade Burnt Slam Slam Forces 2 Turned Off

This is not for me They came They joined They opened up As innocent was they Until Eventually Conceding defeat Nay Forced them into doing so Turned Off What they came for , brought them here Made them join up in the first place And closed them into being open And turning off comments So not only is it sad for the individual writter but also for their follower and friend's such as i they have garnered and coments treasured Granted misery likes company and is a way to get your kicks But in the end will not win you friend's or endear you to strangersl How sad and what's the point of life and been reduced to when joy is found not in good but projecting bad When turning other's off Turns you on

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Harry Horsman

Date: 12/27/2020 10:45:00 PM

Glad someone as made this point, i agree with all you say, Christopher. All the best for the new year...

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/30/2020 1:37:00 PM

Cheers Harry Only quite surprised nobody has said or brought it up before. Happy new year to you and a yours best wishes and happy new year all the best

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/21/2020 6:22:00 AM

Who would block your comments, I love your wholesome direct, and unique poetry, honest and from the heart. Should anyone hurt your feelings, answer them in the same vein. God Bless, A Wonderful, Happy and peaceful Christmas to you and yours my friend, Hugs Jennifer.

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/21/2020 9:17:00 AM

Don't know don't really care Jen. Hope you and your family have a lovely lovely Christmas Hugs and blessings to you and yours cheers thanks a lot Jen

Gary Radice

Date: 12/20/2020 1:28:00 PM

Christopher, has someone blocked you or given you a negative comment? I always tell myself Poetry Soup is a microcosm of life's rich tapestry. It can be very rewarding and encouraging but fickle at times too. As long as you are happy with your work..write on! If anyone else is..that's a bonus. If people don't like what you write then..that's their issue..Keep writing. :)

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/21/2020 9:15:00 AM

And i am not arsed at all about bei g given a bad or critical comment myeslf. A comment is a comment to me be that good or bad. It wouldn't make me turn them or my comments off either way regardless

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/21/2020 9:13:00 AM

Maybe it is just me Gary i dont honestly know as i have never given or written a negative comment . I think ?? Dunno

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/19/2020 3:08:00 PM

Christopher I wouldn’t be too concerned about someone turning off comments, as you said you never met, could have many hidden issues going on in their life’s, just keep writing and inspiring others will come along, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/21/2020 9:10:00 AM

Yeah David this poem is about those who seem quite a lot of lately who have felt the need to turn off there comments facility. Or maybe they are just blocking me don't know ?