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roll-up roman shade letting in the light, night down.... crushed gecko plop

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Valsa George

Date: 3/17/2023 2:14:00 AM

Gecko some how leaves a creepy sensation in me especially when it plops down. Good one Sara...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/17/2023 5:24:00 AM

Valsa, Oh, this one was dead because it was somehow on the Roman shade that I rolled up. I guess it got crushed by the pressure. It looked like it had bled internally. It was sad to see it fall out on the floor__dead. Thanks for the visit and for taking time to read and comment. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2023 10:47:00 PM

Cute one, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2023 2:30:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Good to see you here. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/4/2023 6:51:00 AM

Yeah, that happens so many times, Sara..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2023 8:56:00 AM

A first for me, Jo. LOL..I was shocked. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/4/2023 2:00:00 AM

Fascinating haiku.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2023 3:47:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I had seen the lizard inside the play room/sunporch several times, but I never expected to see him/her fall out of the Roman shade all crushed. Sara