Richard Lamoureux Poet Alliteration

Sexy Sultry Smile

Nancy needs Norman, naughty new negligee 
Sexy sultry smile, she seeks satisfaction
Moaning mattress memories, masterfully melding 
Orgasmic origami, hour on hour
Every entry explored, ecstasy enhanced
Elevated energy exceeds every expectation
She smiles, sighs, somehow sad yet satiated


First attempt at this form.
For Dr. Ram's Alliteration contest.

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Fate Dictates July 25, 2014 at 4:51 PM my favourite form, here's hoping you do more and thanks so much for all your comments..curtsy bow...

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 13, 2014 at 4:07 AM Congrats richard on yor greater win! A sensational kinda notty bawdy alliteration eh. Dint understand it completely though. Cheers. Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:31 AM She was attempting to feel her emotional needs within a physical encounter.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 13, 2014 at 2:52 AM Great one Richard! Congrats on awesome win! Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:32 AM Thanks Dr. Upma.

Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2014 at 12:33 AM haha, a humorous sexy one. pretty naughty too!!! I see this was a winner also. BIG congrats Again~~~ Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:32 AM Thanks Andrea.

Mohan Chutani July 12, 2014 at 10:59 PM Richard, you described well an important aspect of life in your alliteration. Congrats Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:33 AM Thanks Mohan.

Arlene Smith July 12, 2014 at 8:09 PM WOW! Richard! congrats on a great win. Surprised not to see this one placed higher.. Hugs.. Arlene Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:34 AM You are kind Arlene, I'm pleased you like it.

Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 7:12 PM Congrats on a great sexy write ....Seren Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:35 AM Thanks Seren.

A.E. Rivenbark July 12, 2014 at 5:15 PM Sizzling! Congratulations on your win, what a sensual poem. ;D Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:35 AM ;0)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 2:15 PM Hot sexy and watta alliteration! Like your m, o and s best!!:D Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:36 AM Thanks Olive, I really really liked yours.

Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 10:25 AM This sizzles. Congratulations on a great win. Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:38 AM Thanks Faye.

Abdul Malik Mandani July 12, 2014 at 10:05 AM I am sucker for sultry smiles, sigh!!! Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:39 AM Thanks Abdul.

Tim Smith July 12, 2014 at 10:02 AM Nice win on your second offering....If you were in baseball you would be making a fortune...congrats Tim Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2014 at 8:38 AM Thanks Tim, I had forgotten I wrote Sonic Stings.

Barbara Gorelick July 12, 2014 at 8:52 AM " hour on hour"..I cant imagine..lol...congrats on a very sexy win.BG Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:59 AM Honestly exhausting but worth the effort *lol*

Jan Allison July 12, 2014 at 6:16 AM dropping back with my congratulations. Hugs JAN XX Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:58 AM Thanks Jan, hugs back.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2014 at 5:12 AM Enjoyed the sexy sultry smile, Richard and congrats on the win Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:58 AM Thanks Dr. Ram.

Arthur Vaso July 10, 2014 at 8:51 PM I just came from reading Casarahs poems, did someone slip some love potions into the Soup? LOL I am not to familiar with the form, but I loved the poem!!! Haven't been around as much, so hoping all is well you Richard! Richard Lamoureux July 11, 2014 at 7:09 AM I for one am glad to see you back.

Verlena S. Walker July 9, 2014 at 2:02 PM Nice Rick... Good first attempt... Verlena Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2014 at 2:11 PM Thanks again Verlena, I appreciate the visits.

Paul Callus July 6, 2014 at 7:14 AM Might be your first attempt, Richard, but I would be more than happy had I written it. gl in contest. // paul Paul Callus July 12, 2014 at 5:25 AM ...back again, this time with congratulations! Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 8:13 AM Thanks for your kind words Paul. I am off to check out your work. I have been to busy so it will be nice to catch up.

Len Gasun July 6, 2014 at 2:33 AM Brilliant alliteration you've successfully created on first attempt my dear friend Richard. I like it. So honored to read one of your precious gems this afternoon. Thank u so much and good luck in the contest. love and big hugs, Leonora Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 6:27 AM Thanks Leonora, a little luck is always welcome.

Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2014 at 10:33 PM Well, you wrote it like a pro Richard! Excellent job! It is a great entry and sure to do well. Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 6:27 AM Thanks for the thoughtful visit Connie.

Casarah Nance July 5, 2014 at 8:20 PM So sizzling so sexy, what woman would wish for wonderland like this, well we would know one:) great way to alliterate,:) Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 6:31 AM I know of at least one guy as well. *lol*

Charmaine Chircop July 5, 2014 at 3:41 PM I love your first attempt in aliteration..Exquisite and Intriguing. Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 6:34 AM Thanks my dear, a smile and hug back to you. Charmaine Chircop July 5, 2014 at 3:42 PM Exquisite I meant..Smiles ; )

Mama Bear July 5, 2014 at 3:13 PM Bet you have explored this form before but probably not on paper LOL Must say that you are inventive Hugs and Kisses Mamabear

Jadazzle United July 5, 2014 at 3:05 PM extremely sultry and sexy Richard. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith July 5, 2014 at 9:45 AM Nice first attempt.. very risqué ...Tim Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 6:33 AM Thanks Tim, it must be this Canadian air.

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