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Severance Pay - For Contest

Severance Pay His job as Guillotine Tester was short lived. 10/12/2016 for Live or death one liner contest

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Barry Stebbings

Date: 10/17/2016 1:50:00 PM

Brilliant! Congratulations, John. Barry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:33:00 PM

hahaha, this is PRIMO stuff, John. Love it!!

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:13:00 PM

Glad you got a laugh out of this Andrea.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/15/2016 1:51:00 PM

Congrats on winning the top slot John! Balveen

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:12:00 PM

Thanks Baleen for reading and commenting.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/15/2016 11:22:00 AM

congrats John! I thought this was a little funny in a away, that's why I loved it, very clever :) -luloo congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:12:00 PM

Thanks Laura, this could have been the first time I lost my head in a contest

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2016 1:24:00 AM

wow, visual in its expression, john... best congrats on your big win!..huggs

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:11:00 PM

Thanks Nette for you support

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 10/14/2016 10:45:00 PM

Congrats on 1st place! well done. :)

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:10:00 PM

Thank you Sunita, I well drop by your poems soon

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/14/2016 10:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your top placement, John.

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:10:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and comment Afzal, I shall visit your work soon.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/14/2016 8:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:09:00 PM

thanks Alexis

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/14/2016 8:09:00 PM

Priceless John, congratulations...

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:09:00 PM

Thanks Charlie, the job does have an edge to it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/14/2016 7:56:00 PM

LOL! Good one, John!

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:07:00 PM

Thanks Kim

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/14/2016 6:14:00 PM

Wow...to say the least, John! Very clever, and congrats on your top win! Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:06:00 PM

Thank you Sandra.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/14/2016 5:36:00 PM

Very well written, funny and sad.

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:06:00 PM

Thanks Kai, not all jobs guarantee longevity pay.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/14/2016 5:06:00 PM

lol...congrats John...good one

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:06:00 PM

Thanks fro stopping to read and comment Tim, always nice to hear from you.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2016 4:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your one liner win, John, very good :) Hugs Eve

John Lawless
Date: 10/16/2016 9:05:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Luke Irwin

Date: 10/12/2016 2:47:00 PM

Clever title too!

John Lawless
Date: 10/14/2016 4:18:00 PM

Thanks Luke

Luke Irwin

Date: 10/12/2016 2:46:00 PM

Ha! Well done.