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Image result for weeping willow in cemetery

Seems like ten thousand years passed since I came,
       and here you are in this idyllic scene;
under a weeping willow-   pliant and tame.
I, a soul empath with sorrow aflame,
and now I stand lamenting my sorrow;
              my spirit is supine-   numb and weary,
names in veneration for each morrow.
Oh, is it weakness that makes me teary?
Then, a white aura of strength to borrow; 
       incidental-  my love lays in this  g r e e n  . . .

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July 5, 2019


Poetry/Rhyme/Seventeen is the Lucky Number
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1164-274-02
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Written for the Standard Contest, 17 Is The Lucky Number
sponsor, Lu Loo, Theme chosen # Strength of Sorrow

First Place

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Date: 8/8/2019 11:25:00 PM
This is simply gorgeous Constance! Congratulations on your very deserving first placement! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/6/2019 2:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your top win. Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 8/5/2019 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with this amazing heartfelt poem
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Date: 8/4/2019 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations dear heart, beautiful portrayal of sorrow.
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Date: 8/4/2019 10:02:00 PM
Awesome write, Dear Heart, congratulations on your win.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2019 6:10:00 PM
My pleasure and admiration applause in this g r e e n . . . I wish I were a willow to see this beautiful poem come into the world in the shadow of me) Congrats, D.H.
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Date: 8/4/2019 2:45:00 PM
beautifully expressed Dear Heart, blessings and congratulations. Thank you for your participation. Be blessed :)-luloo
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Date: 8/4/2019 1:38:00 PM
Beautifully penned....congratulations on your top win :) love this one!
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