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Seventeen Funeral Cards In His Pocket

Seventeen funeral cards in his breast coat suit pocket Waiting to be discovered, after his death. Filling it up, folded neatly, in a row, We could have remarked on it. No one did. Dad looked at them briefly, Knowing most. But not all. They got tossed. Either now or later. Evidence he had friends. Or acquaintances at least. We never saw him with any of them. Two old ladies were at his funeral. No old men. I watched them put his card in their purses. “Only 89,” one said sadly. The other one laughed.

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Date: 1/25/2019 2:07:00 PM
My late Mother used to say, "You can find something funny, occurring at every funeral." I've found this to be true.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/25/2019 2:39:00 PM
It truly is! I cannot help but think this is exactly what I have found at each one.
Date: 1/25/2019 10:21:00 AM
Caren, very unique idea for a poem and so well written. I have a small, but growing collection of these cards myself. They are a nice reminders. Loved the ending of your poem. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/25/2019 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Warren. My idea came pretty naturally when the idea hit me "sometimes a funeral is funny".
Date: 1/24/2019 9:07:00 PM
Caren you sure have a great way of ending your poems with a humor that most can relate to. This poem is endearing! : ) xxoo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2019 10:51:00 PM
Thank you Connie. This truly happened.
Date: 1/24/2019 6:48:00 PM
This brings up a personal memory. We were at my grandmother's 100th birthday party, and no-one really knew us. My grandpa was her second husband, and most of the people at the party were relatives from her first marriage. It was 30 years, since my grandpa had died. I was very touched, when a man in his 80s came up and said, 'you know, I sure thought a lot of your grandpa!' We never know the secret homely lives our grandparents lived, the kindnesses they may have bestowed. A very moving piece! Thank You!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2019 10:52:00 PM
I know this meant a lot to you, Andrew. It is the little things that touch us the most.
Date: 1/24/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, and I’m glad that I can help anyone to relate in my situation and I look forward to reading your work and making my own .. thank you again
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2019 10:52:00 PM
You are welcome. Keep writing, it is so healthy!

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