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Sevenbits Mask

I’m the one behind the mask... A thin layer of plastic, protecting me from the world... I hide from reality, people sometimes are cruel... Now, it’s time to take it off; Another mask lies beneath. Oct.02.2017 SEVENBITS Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/8/2017 9:33:00 PM

Congratulations WW on your fine win. Loved the surprise ending!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2017 8:36:00 PM

What a clever twist, yet another mask beneath that one. GREAT poem, WW. Congrats.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/8/2017 3:22:00 AM

W2 - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 10/8/2017 2:01:00 AM

Congratulations, WW. What a fantastic last line!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2017 8:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,^WW^,love the poem Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2017 4:48:00 PM

Winged , what a talent you have, I loved this, CONGRATULATIONS!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2017 4:03:00 PM

ohh,the element of surprise was astounding...remarble poem that deserve a fine win, WW... big congrats with thanks for your greeat effort...huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/4/2017 4:02:00 PM

I am enjoying these Sevenbits poems. Well expressed!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2017 6:12:00 AM

Wow, this completely shows the truth of many people, maybe not all, but many! We are more secure under a mask, hiding from the reality of this world, hiding from what others might think of us, not wanting to face everyone with our true face for the risk of embarrassment or scrutiny! I loved how you interwove everything together this morning my friend! Great Work!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/4/2017 5:25:00 AM

Hi WW, This is a good take on the contest theme. You managed to pen the "mask" theme very. Good twist at the end. I didn't see that coming. I wrote one with the "mask" theme as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/3/2017 6:54:00 PM

A very symbolic poem of human nature. As if to say we will all wear a uniform in life. I really enjoyed your poem!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2017 6:58:00 AM

Oh I love the twist at the end ^WW^ it sounds like this character is more than two faced! good luck in the contest:-)hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/3/2017 6:53:00 AM

A mask under a mask--love that turn at the end--best for a win WW!

Silent One

Date: 10/3/2017 6:12:00 AM

Don't we all wear a mask? Deep stuff WW

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2017 4:03:00 AM

- Awesome, W.W. - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 10/3/2017 12:32:00 AM

Brilliant analogy WW and all the best for the contest. You know, a couple of masks might not be enough my dear friend to diffuse the brilliant spiritual light that pours out from you.Even then some might need' eclipse glasses' lol A fave from me ...Maria