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My sister called and read me mundane lines of teenage angst which came from a diary. I laughed and called it drivel. Where did she find such a thing? She then revealed she found it in my old dresser drawer. Oct. 3, 2017 for the 'SEVENBITS' Poetry Contest of nette onclaud

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Date: 10/8/2017 3:24:00 AM
What a lovely little surprise at the end - love this whimsical gem, Andrea - congrats on your win! :-) <3
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Date: 10/8/2017 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea for your win.
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:10:00 PM
back to congratulate you on your win, Andrea, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:52:00 PM
Andrea, delightful, an awesome write and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:21:00 PM
i am like that too, andie, lol!...a charming poem worthy of a fine slot!.. congrats and thanks for supporting this contest...huggs
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Date: 10/7/2017 7:25:00 AM
lol...Nicely penned Andrea
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Date: 10/7/2017 12:07:00 AM
Memories, Andrea. When I look back on my life it sometimes seems like a movie that someone else starred in.
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Date: 10/4/2017 10:19:00 AM
Awesome :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 8:47:00 AM
haha This is cool, Andrea :) It's funny when we look back at the things we felt were so important when we were teens lol Great job!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:50:00 AM
Ha! What a brilliant twist you have within your glorious write my friend! Yes, you have a great twist within your poem, one that competes perfectly with other twists that are out there...yours might just win! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/4/2017 6:18:00 AM
A winning poem, Andrea--love every line--especially the last one makes the impact as intended!
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:39:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I liked how penned this write. I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:06:00 AM
ha ha ha I love that final line - I think many have chosen the diary theme... i did but I've never kept one lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:45:00 AM
Great one Andrea... A fun write... LOved it... Reads like a winner...
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:43:00 AM
A beautiful write, Andrea. A sure winner.
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Date: 10/3/2017 10:19:00 PM
thought about this contest then decided not to enter, good thing because you have a winner....I'd say good luck but that would be redundant
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