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Seven For Chaos and Order- Seeing

Liquid slumber bursting forth through my clogged brain Ink like numbness pouring swiftly down the drain Drinking barbed wire sliding in the dark rain Cutting is deep yet I do not feel the pain Eyes open slowly I look around and see The surgery has returned my sight to me I am blessed to share this day with family For the Hugable one's contest. Written January 27th 2017 Seven for Chaos and Order

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Winged Warrior

Date: 2/2/2017 2:20:00 PM

Congrats!!! Richard...very well done my friend...god bless...^WW^

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2017 1:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved top win with this awesome write, Richard:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/1/2017 6:50:00 PM

What a miraculous ending to such a time of chaos with an unknown outcome, Richard. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Sandra

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/1/2017 5:20:00 PM

Greetings, Richard. Congrats for your well, deserved top placement with this wonderful piece!!! ;-)

Shilpa Chaganti

Date: 2/1/2017 12:36:00 PM

Hearty congrats on your win, Richard... :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/1/2017 11:08:00 AM

a profound exposition of going through a struggle to recover one's health.. a sensitive write geared for an award, rich.. bet congrats and thanks !..huggs

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/31/2017 11:38:00 PM

Hi Richard, I don't know how I missed this one. Excellent take on the contest theme.It reads like a winner to me.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :-) Alexis