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Seven Bits- Mask

I wear it extremely well I gain people's trust quickly my face and smile is perfect I am just the guy next door some say a gq model my mask is the perfect fit that you see my blade too late 10-4-17 Inspired by the Sevenbits contest Sponsor: Nette Oncloud Eighth Place

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/11/2017 9:58:00 PM

Oh really liked the twist at the end of this one!!! (pardon the pun)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/9/2017 9:39:00 AM

Powerful poem. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2017 8:44:00 PM

Yes, I recall this macabre one and am glad to see it on the winners' list.Congrats, Alexis.

Darren White

Date: 10/8/2017 9:54:00 AM

Wonderful Alexis! Congratulations :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/8/2017 3:28:00 AM

Alexis - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2017 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Alexis, : O Hugs Eve ~`*

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2017 4:58:00 PM

Alexis, wonderful, I really like your poem, CONGRATULATIONS!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2017 4:51:00 PM

yes, powerful twist it is, alexis...congrats on your fine spot as i thank you for being part of this contest...huggs

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/7/2017 5:04:00 PM

Hi Nette, I appreciate my placement in your contest. Thanks:-) Alexis

Silent One

Date: 10/5/2017 11:06:00 AM

This is a great entry for the contest.. Good luck..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2017 5:42:00 PM

Oh yes, I had an idea on this one, because I am such a huge fan of murder mysteries!!!! GREAT job.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/4/2017 3:05:00 PM

Cool, dark ending, Alexis. You went real macabre on this fine poem. Excellent fright write ... getting tuned up for Halloween, eh. Excellent poem though. Love and smiles always.

Joseph May

Date: 10/4/2017 9:49:00 AM

Nice twist at the end Alexis...best wishes

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/4/2017 8:31:00 AM

This is great for the contest! Definitely a surprise twist at the end. And a good message that we should not let someone's gq looks hinder us from seeing their "blade" !

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2017 5:12:00 AM

Gee Alexis I didn't see the ending coming at all!! fabulous twist there!!:-) hugs jan xx