Seven

. ...On the seventh Mine day uv leave this day turned pitch the moon glowed yet trimmed Ourn limbz were locked with want until the entrance uv mine fly Sending me to mine lonely uv her Mine abode *"the entrance uv 'mine fly'": my jet {3-15-2023 my son'z birthday today}

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Joe Maverick

Date: 3/31/2023 3:33:00 AM

Your too much james.' This nearly 'Flew right by me' lol)) i suppose You might counter its just My droll..'

James Peranteau
Date: 3/31/2023 5:36:00 AM

...the wit sir ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2023 1:04:00 PM

you are the king of erotic poetry here, I will give you that. Thank goodness you use words that we can't always get. hahaha

James Peranteau
Date: 10/12/2023 8:56:00 AM

p.s...really find mine arcane in the thesaurus ;)...p.s.s...i really don't have anything to hide though Andrea, i'm just that flippy romantisist when i write ;)

James Peranteau
Date: 10/12/2023 8:41:00 AM

most pneuma don't realize how easy it is....i study lexicons and thesauruses...gives me the heads up on double entendres i suppose...hint hint; if ya spy a dictionary, scroll to origin uv word ...they git that from a lexicon.(i find i can be quite furtive(amusingly) using many times...thanx for read'n me ;)