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Setting Sun 1

Setting sun Splash of burgundy paan-spit and the paterfamilias nodding off pink filial freeness silhouetted against a crimson feel- flare (or was it orange flair or even purple fair) symbiotic exchanges slapstick sequences elfin hemlines and tarty décolletages catching agoraphobic impulses homing… 04 aug 13 For Charlotte's contest

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/13/2013 6:13:00 AM

soup mail!

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 12:09:00 PM

Jag, lovely win............* HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/7/2013 5:53:00 AM

Wonderful description of a sunset Jag...Love the colors described throughout the poem...Congratulations - Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 7:04:00 PM

JAG. ... CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM!!! awesome :) LUV~ LINDA

John Posey

Date: 11/6/2013 12:36:00 PM

I salute you, my friend. May your verses always bring pleasure to your readers.... Jake

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2013 11:17:00 AM

congrats on your winning slot, jag!..:) huggs

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/5/2013 5:07:00 PM

congrats on your win in my contest, jaggy, you know I love your work and this one is no exception; unique and wonderful :)

Skat A

Date: 8/20/2013 9:18:00 PM

Jag, well done .congrats... love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 5:12:00 PM

Hello Jag, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! PD

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/18/2013 4:33:00 PM

this is another of your deep pieces jaggy, and I would've placed it even higher for its originality, love the vivid colours and the alliteration, congrats :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2013 9:11:00 AM

A most excellent sunset, congratulations!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/18/2013 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your third place win my dear friend Jag. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/8/2013 5:01:00 PM

From your "paan-spit" I'm guessing you're Indian, Jag (lol). I've always wanted to experience an Indian sunset. I believe it's a sight to remember forever. Hey, good luck in the contest with this gem. Fingers crossed. Licia :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2013 3:01:00 AM

- Jag, so beautiful .... I admire your "image" - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 8/7/2013 5:39:00 PM

Very pretty sunset Jag...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2013 11:19:00 AM

wowow, jag... you romped with this in such a child-like manner.. just icrebily appealing... love it!..:) huggs

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/6/2013 8:15:00 PM

Hi Jag :) LOVE this! There is a playfulness here and it has so much atmosphere. I especially liked that it feels somehow not quite complete, but, for me, this is the beauty of it. I am not satisfied because it was so good, so I read it three times. Best wishes in the contest. Oh, lol, I just wrote a poem about art and actually mentioned setting suns, not realizing there was a contest about it!